Being a Ryou x Ichigo, Masaya x Ichigo, and Ichigo x Kisshu fan, I happen to find this story very enjoyable.

Nice grammar, maybe a typo here or there, but what the heck, we're all human, we're not perfect.

And I like how your writing is simple, but it grabs the point, not too detailed, but not too simple, either. I like that. It's easy on the eyes for those of us who don't like reading very detailed fan-fictions.

I also like how the break-up between Masaya and Ichigo was actually believable, and it sounded as if they were to break up in the manga/anime, it'd happen that way, not something ridiculous and way, way OOC, like Masaya cheating on her or (dare I say it) rape her, which are two things he'd never, ever do.

The only thing that kind of irks me, however, is that Kisshu seemed a little too, accepting, I guess? I personally think he'd probably be a little more resistant to go shopping or something of the like, but hey, if he was gonna get a chance with Ichigo, I'm sure he'd be willing to do anything!

The Minto x Masaya works in this story as well, I do think, if given the chance, it could very well happen, seeing as Masaya is very sweet, and probably willing to spoil Minto. He could also probably bring out more of her sweet side, and would be patient with whatever decisions she wanted to make or something.

And, although I loathe Ryou x Lettuce with a burning passion, you made it look very cute in this story, although I'd probably recommend more Lettuce in the story, if it was her birthday and all.

Anyway, all in all, this story definitely has potential, and is an enjoyable read.

By the way, before I end this review, I'd like to ask if you would be writing your Mew Mew daughters story soon? I know, it's probably been like, six years since you wrote about TMM, but I'm dying to know!

The limited amount of Minto x Kisshu babies on this site is ridiculous, and you're possibly the only one besides Razuiberri who wrote about one!

Oh, by the way, I'm very sorry for the anonymous, childish reviews that I gave back in like, March. Kitteh is the signed name, so you'll know it's me.

I've matured much more now in the past three months, so please ignore my complaints on how much I don't like Ryou x Lettuce, they're stupid, and if I don't like a couple you do, then I shouldn't be anonymously "reviewing" all of your stories that have that certain pairing in it.

If you could ignore it, I'd appreciate it!

Hope to see more from you soon.

-Kitteh

this is an awsome fanfic. go Kish, Die Masaya,Ryou hmmm, no comment.

shells210

I loved that, I also had a break up with my boyfriend cause we drifted apart, and now I'm inlove with a boy at my school who doesn't even want to be friends with me :'(

Speaking as a (as requested) Kisshu/Ichigo fan, I personally think this story is pretty darn good.

Seriously, though, have you seen some of the k/i stories out there? Gah.

Not too much oocness, a fairly nice breakup arc(as much as i love it when Masaya is an evil jerk about breaking up with Ichigo, the whole personality 180 gets a teensy bit old after a while), only minimal involvement of other pairings...like I said, pretty darn good for a oneshot.

On a scale of one to ten, all things considered...I think I'd give it around eight.

Sorry, too lazy to log in.

Anyway. . . Ichigo/Kisshu fan here! I LOVE KISSHU (thought I'd get that out)

I like this story, although it's too. . . normal. Kisshu seems a little out of character. I don't think he's one to go shopping, even if he does love Ichigo.

Good job on grammar and stuff.

i think its good cant you write one where she choose.

Onegai(please).

hm... I am a die hard kisshu and ichigo fan and I just don't know what to think of this story it was good but hm... this is hard to decide what I think but I JUST DON'T KNOW!

mew mew blueberri OUT!

good job it was cute and you should write more and i think if you dont the Kisshu fangirls will get mad and the IchixKish fan girls will also be on your tail im both but i have enough imagination to last me a while if i run i i read a story if those girls run out they get viciouse * Hids behind Kisshu* yeah i'd rather not be eaten alive by rabid Kish fangirls would you? .

Hey interesting, nice idea. I'm kind of wavering between KXI and MXI (I've written both) and I really like how you portrayed Ichigo's indecision. I also agree with the Ryou-brotherly love thing, because personally I think Ryou is meant for Retasu but would always be close friends with Ichigo.

The MintoXMasaya...Well in this story it fit, considering you needed him with a Mew and the others don't fit (Retasu's taken, Zakuro wouldn't give him a second glance, Pudding...need I say more) but I'm normally not for that pairing. I think MInt would be one for guys who will pamper her when she wants, like Keiichiro (I'm one of the rare MintXKei-ers) but I really have nothing against MXM. It's good.

Overall great story. Yeah, it was long review, sorry. But I liked it. A different idea, not overused. Great!

ILH

hey im a KxI fan and no offence or anything but i absolutely hate the couple kish and mint i kinda think it is well wrong i mean they both hate each other and never even pay attention to each other apart from when they were fighting!

but anyways i think she should choose kish and masaya and mint live happily ever after!

great story i love it!

Ja Ne

mel

I love Kish and Ichigo fan fics! Kish roxs, and deserves Ichigo, in my opinion. I like the story, though I don't like cliff hangers. They drive me nuts! Then again, that's probably because my insane curiousity. Loved the story!

This story was ok i am a Masaya/Ichigo fan but i can stand

Kish x Ichigo storys but overall it was good

YAY! KxI 4 EVER! I like how you put Ryou and Ichigo as friends because a few days ago I was thinking that Ryou's love for Ichigo is more like how an older brother loves his younger sister, in that kind of protective and friendly way. I think that putting them as friends was a perfect idea... wait... there's no such thing as perfect... ... ...

As a Masaya/Ichigo and/or Ryou/Ichigo fan...I love this. It's very good, capturing what any REAL 13-year-old would think. I mean, how could Ichigo've been so devoted to Masaya? You captured them all very well.

And Ryou/Retasu rocks, too!

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more kisshu and ichigo please! before i go nuts 0_o *twitch*