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Reviews For: Gimmick

princessebee 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abusethis literally made my eyes cross it was so good. I have to agree with Thyme in Her Eyes, she said a great deal of what I really enjoyed about this fic and I agree - with Joker it's going to jump from cruel to cute, playful to passionate and painful, tender and sweet to vicious and perverse. There's power exchange, plenty of willing submission from a masochist who's needs are met with Joker's own natural inclination to dominate and take sadistic pleasure, and it's all just hot hot hot. yum. There's just a couple of little things in terms of grammar and sentence structure that need to be tweaked, if you'd ever like a quick beta to go over your work I'd be happy to.
Kichi 2008-01-14 ch 1,	abusehaha! nice! poor stupid harley
Renna-chan 2007-08-16 ch 1,	abuseWriting lemons is SO difficult. One has to keep it in the middle between something crass and dull and something that sounds like it comes from the pages of a Harlequin novel (BWAHAHAHAHA cough). You did a very good job. I can't write smut nearly as well ;) Kudos!
SaJi 2007-07-26 ch 1,	abuseDarn your Joker/Harley smut. shakes fist =P
Grendle11853 2005-11-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseSomewhat disturbing. As it should be. Come to think of it she would have to like having sex with the Joker for her to be as infatuated with him. Thats what I think anyway. What do I know, I'm a guy. I liked the story alot, Harely is one of my favorite charracters.
Killing Joke 2005-11-16 ch 1,	abuseWow, that's a very quick and dirty (no pun intended!) piece. You've got a real skill with descriptions, and the crafting of this to make it all fit into such a small space, relatively speaking, is masterful. applauds
Kelly Renee 2005-11-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseI agree with 'Thyme In Her Eyes'. You DO have a great balance between mind and body.. It's not pointless. I usually avoid lemons for that reason. but you, you're brilliant! Keep up the great work! 'Sometimes their play involved funny gadgets, such as whoopee cushions or cream pies.' Why did that make me laugh? =P XD
nicci 2005-11-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseGimmick was great...you write so well...you make the reader wanting more to read...keep it up... : )
Amanda 2005-11-09 ch 1, anon.	abusesigh joy bliss Seriously you guys, I think we need to consider a support group!
Thyme In Her Eyes 2005-11-09 ch 1,	abuseI'm never, EVER going to find the time to e-mail you back at this rate... cries pathetically This is because I called you a tease yesterday, isn't it? T_T Still, if I'm going to get distracted then it's a small mercy that my distraction should be this good! XD There's nothing like a nice dose of debauchery to brighten up my day... ;) perverted grin More seriously: your first real venture into the JHQ boudoir worked beautifully. You really have no reason to worry about how you'll handle this aspect of the relationship further on in AMR. You have a great balance between mind and body in this - it doesn't feel like pointless boring smut, but and interesting (and steamy!) look into the J/H relationship. You've got a good grasp on how to keep the writing flowing well too - you don't overload it with too many details, considering what a short, sparse piece this is. It's loaded with energy and movement. Plus, you really know how to draw a girl in - the opening sentence was such a hook. ^_~ And what a great look at these two behind closed doors - you write very sensually and stirringly in places, but you also get the rough, painful and disturbing aspects of the romance down great, as well as the Joker's unpredictability and the lighter, more playful moments. Delightfully kinky, and it's great to see a writer really consider what it must be LIKE between these two, and not be afraid or ashamed of writing a more mature piece accordingly. You also have the characterisation down great, and you touch on the power-play between them very well, and the total control Joker has over Harley. The Joker's dominance, Harley's sheer need...you bring them to life. And oh, how I LOVED the ending. The idea that he always kisses her afterwards...oh, it's twisted, disturbing and so romantic. So possessive, like a brand of ownership, and yet so passionate. You really capture the equally damaging and rewardingly sensuous elements of the sexual side of the J/H relationship, and in such a smoothly-written piece. Anyway, as a reward, I'll suggest that you hunt down the album "Milk and Kisses" by Cocteau Twins. Some of the songs are so blindingly erotic that I can barely stand up after a listen. ^_~
Amy 2005-11-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseWoah! I luv your work its so awesome! Yay! This story rocks...I luv how you describe the Joker/Harley realtionship...specially in your story the Madhouse Romance! yay!
Sno-Chan 2005-11-08 ch 1,	abuseI was about to sign off and stumble to bed when the author alert came through. I'm so glad I waited! What an...interesting look into their sex life. Only you can make a whoopee cushion sound like a sex toy. And he kisses her at the end no matter how savage the encounter! How disturbingly romantic. Yet you captured the possessiveness of the Joker's relationship with her and the power he has. I daresay your venture into evil clown ** was a success! I can't wait for the next chapter of MHR. You are so cool.

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