that's really cute. i wish it had been longer

Successful, even though you went out on a limb. I loved the way you ended it.

This was quite good. Wonderful job on an interesting P.O.V.

I recently wrote a Zabuza drabble called Ebb in my Of Romance and Kunai Knives Drabbles and am working on an AnkoXZabuza peice called 'Blood on the Snow' I'd love it if you'd give me a review and tell me how I did on them.

--Ohtori Akio

At first you had me thinking this was told from the pov of Sakura (prob intentional, my guess ^_^), then I scratched my head when I read "She was much smarter than people gave her credit for" and I did a doubletake and read more cautiously. The use of the word of "human" didn't click until I read Naruto mentioning revealing the speaker as a rabbit and I went 'ahh...'. It was a very intriguing story, a full story done about Haku and Zubaza through another being's pov, an animal's no less! This is truly skillful. I'm glad you picked this theme for the story, Haku and Zubaza are my fav. couple in Naruto. Thank you for for this great work! :)

*blinks* a...rabbit...now I'm kinda confused...O_O...

A very pretty, insightful and enjoyable little thing.

Awesomely different point of view!

Very interesting POV ^^

I really like this... ít feels a little sad, but happy-endish at the same time.

That’s so sweet. Very sad but sweet ^^