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ConfuzzledAtLife
2008-08-11
ch 1,
abuseOMG, that was, like, so freaky! I feel so sorry for Legolas, since he's so scared of the dark. Feel sorry for both of them.

I want to go to your house, kidnap the plot bunny, and set him free to destroy that room. It scares me! It's like, some paradoxial universe splitter! No idea what that means, but it sounds scientific (says the blonde).

Gosh, I can't believe it ended! NO! At least now I won't have to endure them being mercilessly tortured by your plot bunny. Is it wrong to say I kind of like that little fluffball (dodges arrows and swords that creepy L & A fans have made to honour their fav characters). I love the way you wrote this; I'm not kidding, my heartbeat actually increased! Screw going to PE, I can just read this story!
asdfjkl;
2008-08-03
ch 1, anon.
abusethis oneshot deserves a full story! you know you want to add on to it...
Larner
2007-08-30
ch 1,
abuseVery strange! Wonderfully eerie!
sty
2007-08-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseA lot of suspense there... Well written!
Val Evenstar
2007-08-04
ch 1,
abuseI will never read this story in a dark room at night in the middle of the woods..that I promise! Well, I couldn't read in the dark, but yeah. Creepy.
reader
2007-07-29
ch 1, anon.
abusewhat happens next?
Neko-Cat-Sama
2007-06-12
ch 1,
abuseThat is creepy and well written. Good oneshot. It sets up a great second chapter...
Anonymist
2007-03-16
ch 1,
abusePerfectly creepy. I like that you leave what's actually going on a mystery. There's just the nameless horror of a black room, and no way out...
RumorUnderOath
2007-03-02
ch 1,
abuseuh! no way! so what happens! i wanna know! is there a sequil? or another chapter?? ugh this is terrible! i wanna know! lol im acting like a little kid...not so good...
Wulfeh
2007-02-27
ch 1,
abuse*shivers* I don't like that...you need to make a sequal...NOW
nagisha-chan
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abuseWell that was creepy if nothing else.. *shivers* Anyway really good story.. and creepy. xD

Oh, my poor, little Leggy! *hugs Legolas*

But.. did they ever get out of there?
hoom
2006-08-07
ch 1,
abuseOk, now that, was creepy. I wish I knew what happend next though. Oh well, I like your style, and I guess you left it like that so we could keep wondering what happened. Although, I am curios as to know where this dark room was. Cool, story anhow!

~Namarie~
: )
2006-06-21
ch 1, anon.
abusehuh?
well written but kinda pointless.
leggylover03
2006-05-16
ch 1,
abuseHi, This is Rhonda the Admin from HavenOfDreams. We are very excited about you posting your fics on the website.

If for any reason you think you will not have time to actually post just send me an e-mail at and I will add them for you.
Kadasa-Mori
2006-01-20
ch 1,
abuse...

(turns and makes sure I can see the door)
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