Aw, that was very cute, and I liked it a lot. I was so gutted when they didn't make a second season, and this has taken me rght back to the good old days!

Thankyou!

great job

I think it is of it was good.I think Jesse is

omg... that was such a good story - i really want to know what happens next... good one

Aw so cute!

Very gd story! R u going 2 continue...? I hope so! :D Well even if u don't u should at least write another story! :) x

oh...good...please continue...need to know...please!

Good story. But way to much cusing.

Wow... I love all of these Jesse and Kira stories, but this one almost had me crying...

That was nice...very cute...are you going to continue it or make another one?

hey! I love that you write fanfiction on invasion! i am not that crazy about jesse and kira and that kind of stuff but hey atleast you are writing invasion fanfics. thanks and keep writing!

aww its soo cute