Well, Koyla - you are a genius! This storyhas been pure gold, I tell you ^^ I have enjoyed Reading it so much. I found the end oddly harrowing - even though it was McKay, I felt like mini-mckay was lost, and that was sad for me. But it was also happy, cause everyone is okay ^^

I loved how you showed Rodneys change - the grooaarrgh, dinasoar line stuck in my head, it was amazing ^^ also, kiki was such a cute adition. I felt so sorry for him, as well, when he was in the nursery. You showed his emotions unbeleivably well - respect. Also, Ronons new side was perfect, fitting into his charachter beautifully even though it is not a side we see in the show itself. Sheppards connection with Rodney is also very good.

I swear, it's hard to take you srsly with Julie the cow (though that's not an insult -serious is solo overrated...), but when you look at this story itself, it is so amazing and powerful and you are a god =]

also loved the amazing love story between you and Julie that we learnt through the A/Ns - it was truly amazing to be part of that, even as a passive reader *looks into the middle distance epically, bleary eyed* amazing...truly... ^^ say hi to her from me =D

thanx for posting this, it's real gold =]

Kai x

Hey Kolya, fantastic story. It's not often that I read something that can actual make me cry, but the chapter with baby mckay in the nursery had me bawling. I am in fact currently typing this underwater while I wait for the waters to receed. And may I just say that I am incrediable glad that you and your lovely cow Julie have been reunitied. Keep up the great work!

*applauds* that was beautiful
amazing, fantastical! kick **!
i loved it, i loved it, i loved it, I LOVED IT!
you are just, wow, like damn

i'm blubbering! BLUBBERING!
Dude you have me sobbing over here

Ronon, Rodney, Kiki, and Sheppard made me cry

oh my gosh he's gone crazy!

poor McKay
lmao

A fantastic story, really well written and funny. Mini McKay might have been an unholy terror, but he was also the sweetest little thing and you described his frustration over his treatment and his descent into his second childhood really well. The hologram nightmare was a fantastic idea and for some reason, the Wraith on a stick thing had me in knots. The toy cat was uber sweet as well and I love that Ronon kept it and everyone else seems to have kept or tried to keep different little mementos of Little Rodney.

Best line? McKay, of course:

"Take my pulse or something, Carson! Fix this!"

lol oh your so cute, I had to review!!Your Julie sounds wonderful. :) I love your story. Your Rodney is adorable and I hope he does something to get some attention because being ignored is not cool xD Thank you very much~

Beautiful. Just beautiful. My favorite de aged story. Great job.

Wow. MiniMcKay is crazy. Nice.

"Sheppard was sacked out on a bed across the aisle, snoring softly."

Hee, I love the mental image of that.

Awesome story!! Very well written!!

This is an amazing story. Your characterization is brilliant, the voice just come alive in the writing. Love this type of plot too, I only wish I could find more like it. Lovely read.

That was awesome! I loved it!