This is great for a first fic - do write more, I love the twist at the end. I'm a nine fan so pleased it's him again!

I take it that Sophia becomes Susan? That's quite a neat idea for what happens to her. Nice aftermath fic of the Time War, u capture a weary Doctor well. Keep it up :- )

Very sweet- like it. Specially the way the Doctor meets little Rose and her Mum.