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| Pointed Teeth 11/9/05 . chapter 1
"“5 Fingers” Kip whined; loosing all cred he had gained with the readers when kicking the door through."
*cracks up* Best. Line. Ever! XD
Glad to see you're back in the writing gig, mate (and with your usual funny style). A good start, nice and punchy and sets up the story well. Could use a smidge (but just a smidge) of beta-ing, but nothing too major. I look forward to the next chapter )