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| DoodleTaffy 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseaww!that was so sad and strane,..and im so confused!lol.i dont get zivas part @ times,i mean i understand she feels she cant go undercover b/c of all the pressure and her past,but its other things like this:'Why did they have to make her pregnant?'I didnt get that line @ all.who had to get her preg?and wat really was she feeling?and the ending i didnt get @all either,was it b/c they're supose to be married?im srry.pls hellp me understand.thanks!"D |
| Lisa 2006-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood story - a realistic view of both Tony and Ziva (who's character I unashamededly prefer to Kate's!) There's a real spark between these two - far more than there ever was between Tony and Kate. They smouldered in this episode and later, in 'Boxed-In.' I enjoyed reading this. |
| Dances-With-Chocolate 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI liked this a lot! It was a great story! Thanks! |
| Guevera 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuseAww that was perfect! I'm a Tate shipper myself, but as I see more and more of season 3 with Ziva in it I'm starting to doubt that... am I still a Tate shipper? And your story was the perfect insight into Ziva's mind, her thoughts and her feelings - and now you've made me doubt that even more!! It just seems that Tony and Ziva have more chemistry than Kate and Tony did - as seen here in your story. I loved the line at the end "But as she walked down the hallway she realized that she hadn’t kissed Tony goodbye." - That was the PERFECT ending! It shows that Ziva was beginning to bond with Tony more than she ever intended - You HAVE to write more fics like this, they're perfect!! Bec xxoo |
| RT4ever 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good...Thank you! |
| shirik 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abuseOH THIS IS SO NICE!! please develope it to more chapters!! i like ziva and tony together. i loved it when tony thought about saving ziva befor saving himself. these little things make his characters even better! |
| Karieflybabe 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abuseWOW! Very nice. |
| gotmilk 2005-11-09 ch 1, | abuseExcellent POV from Tony and Ziva from the episode. :) |
| Arachne21 2005-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love you. No, really. I love that even whilst he's with Ziva, you made Tony think of Kate (and ask for her forgiveness, too!). And I love that Ziva seems to be as detached from it all emotionally in your fic as I really think she is in the series. And I especially love that you picked up on the fact that she didn't kiss him goodbye. As a huge TATE shipper, this episode was really difficult to watch. I couldn't believe Tony would just get over Kate's death in a matter of weeks to the point where he'd be happily rolling around in bed with this newcomer (job or no job). I felt insulted and upset as a fan that the powers that be at the show would foist a Tony/Ziva "pairing" on us so soon after Kate died, and knowing how many people loved Tony/Kate. Thank you for not buying into the hype and proving that out of sight isn't necessarily out of mind. |