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BlackxValentine
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
Sad but how did he die?

I'm confused
imaginary-rain
2007-07-05 . chapter 1
OMG I lone this story!I've atleast read this story 20 times!Awesome story!
AzureRose15
2007-06-17 . chapter 1
sad and emotional. i liked iy please write another story
MegFallow
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so sad, I loved it-nice twist making Henry the one that died instead of Eileen, and I loved the part where it mentions him drawing those cult symbols on the wall when he was six was so engrossing you should make a story on that, so beautiful you make for a great writer.
Santiago
2006-01-24 . chapter 1
HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO LIVE WITHOUT YOU (Michael Bolton)

I could hardly believe it
When I heard the news today
I had to come and get it straight from you
They said you were leavin'
Someone swept you heart away
From the look upon your face I see it's true
So tell me all about it, tell me 'bout the plans you're makin'
Then tell me one thing more before I go

Chorus:
Tell me how am I supposed to live without you
Now that I've been lovin' you so long
How am I supposed to live without you
How am I supposed to carry on
When all that I've been livin' for is gone

I didn't come here for cryin'
Didn't come here to breakdown
It's just a dream of mine is coming to an end
An how can I blame you
When I built my world around
The hope that someday we'd be so much more than friends
And I don't wanna know the price I'm gonna pay for dreaming
When even now it's more than I can take

Chorus

And I don't wanna face the price I'm gonna pay for dreaming
Now that your dream has come true

Chorus
Casual Hazard
2005-11-23 . chapter 1
That was so sad.
How selfish of her - Henry sacrificed himself to save her and all for what? Then again, this is the Mother ending?
The flashback with his childhood was rather interesting - I never thought he'd be influenced by their trip to Silent Hill when he was still so young.
Gaia Faye
2005-11-17 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Henry. I'm thinking 'Mother' ending?

I liked the part when Eileen was talking to his mother. Nice touch.

Poor Eileen in the ending. It's kind of ominous though. I mean, does that complete the ritual or what? Methinks Eileen is not thinking of the bigger picture in her despondent state.
diddly day
2005-11-12 . chapter 1
WOW! Bravo! Well done ol' chap! I loved it. Sorry I haven't been around for a while. I've been working the closing shift at work and don't have much time to write anymore. But you did a great job. Very sad, and very touching. Wonderful work yet again!
Saddened Soul
2005-11-10 . chapter 1
Before the inevitable 'Cradle of Forest' is published on the site, allow me to get this review over with...

You used the 'Mother' ending, correct? Nonetheless, a good little one-shot; there's not much to say about it, so whatever.

I feel lazy... and I am... good luck with 'The Hardest Part'.

~@_@~
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