Wow...this is really good! I was a little confused for the fact that...I dont' know the original names...but it was TOO good! yayness! I'm sorry your done writting, I do know how you feel... Any way! Congrats on this story. It's great.

SMgoddess

I really liked this. props!

I love this story!Great job!

sniff! That was so beautiful! I could hardly read the last few parts my eyes were so full of tears! Please! Don't ever stop! Yamashirou 4ever! *sobs off in a corner* Just...magnificent!

This is a great story and you should write because you want to wether people review or not

I liked this story and I think you are a good writer keep it up

This is good! You should write more.

Everclear kick ass.

I like your stories. Anyone who bashes them is narrow-minded and... ummm... yeah. They suck. :O) Keep writing, I love your work, and yaoi, of course.

Angelicmon, I don't think your story is bad, but if you want good reviews, take my advise... I never wrote a story having to do with a TV show, infact, I only ever wrote 1 story, but I have read enough to be able to say something... this story is sorta confusing, especially near the end, I'm never really sure who is narrating which part, and at the end, it is neither Matt nor Izzy, infact, I'm not sure WHO was narrating. I think that you are trying too hard. When you write a story with separate Narators and switch like that, it tends to get kinda confusing, and it would hit certain parts that seem to be off key. Maybe you should try a single first-person account, or even narrate the story as you would see it on TV... eg: He wasn't sure of what he was thinking right then, but when Davis told TK that he was gay and that he was inlove with him..." Well, don't give up... and if you do decide to do another story, e-mail me the story, and, in the subject line, let me know that it is you. Maybe between the 2 of us, we can come up with something good. L8Rz

Cool story!

Whoa good fic!

BEEP!

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very good! *claps* dont give up!

Neeee, Angelicmon! Don't be so hard on yourself! I loved this story. Seriously. I rarely see Yamashiros on the net, let alone good ones, and this fic was great. It was sweet and romantic, and it fit well with the lyrics. Great work, and think positive! You've got talent!