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| Hershinator 2006-01-08 ch 3,  | abusegreat 3rd chapter and 2nd chapter as well, I still don't understand is this guy really John, or is John a ghost, what is he,really? Please reply |
| Emerald124 2006-01-04 ch 3, | abuseHmm...interesting. Thanks for updating! |
| Hershinator 2006-01-04 ch 2, | abusewow awesome chapter, sorry this is supposed to be a review for chapter one, but since I apparently sent one already, I can't submit another one. Really good stuff, I read the whole thing. So is John really dead? or is he a ghost and dosn't know that he died? I loved the part when he said "hey who died"? |
| Eternal Optimist 2005-12-13 ch 1, | abusePlease please update again soon id really hate to see this story discontinued. Its really good. Well i hope you can update again soon. |
| Emerald124 2005-12-03 ch 2, | abuseInteresting thus far. Evil twin? |
| Eternal Optimist 2005-11-29 ch 2, | abusePlease update again soon i really wanna hear the rest of your story. You havent updated in a while. Im glad that johnny got there in time to save Purdy. |
| LoneTread 2005-11-14 ch 1, | abuseIt's not bad, but it would be drastically improved if you were to format it better. You know, put quotation marks around dialogue, start a new paragraph when a new person speaks -- things like that. Apart from that, it was interesting and unique, and I thought the end was really funny. I'm interested in seeing what's going to happen...but only if it's readable. (If you'd like a beta, I'd be glad to help. Send an email my way if you're interested.) |
| Hershinator 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abusegreat story I hope to read more, your a good writer. |