This was very good, and I only caught the occasional grammar/spelling mistake, such as "Toru-kun" as oppsed to "Tohru-kun" and I can deal with that.
What I'd like to know is why you use both "Miss Honda" as seen in the English anime, and "Tohru-kun", as seen in the Japanese anime. I think this is rather ridiculous. If you're going to use 'Miss Honda' then just stick to no honorifics, 'kay?
Sorry for sounding so evil, I'm not usually like that. :(

But other than that, KAWAII!
:)
-Kari

Ah, you're one shot is so kawaii! Nice job! ^^

Aw! That was so cute~

AH! so awsome! its adorable! i LOVED the way you used the word nuzzle! thata my fav word!

Wow, that was absolutely wonderful!! I love love love LOVE this story, it is so cute! The only thing bad I have to say is I WISH IT WAS LONGER! lol, this is definatly going in my favorites!! Great job!

Ha, Ayame and Shigure make me laugh. This was funny with just the right amount of fluff. Keep writing, you're good at it!

U FORGOT MOMIJI!?!?:( Nicepart with the camera though.

ahaha that was awesome... shigure being himself... is totally insane... nice wor, ehehehhe

This is such a good story that whenever I come back to read stories that I've already read I laways read this one

I thought the story was really cute. I would have love to know what would have happened to the all the pictures being taken.

I realy liked this story It was realy good you are very talented ^-^

This is one of my favorite stories around the couple Tohru x Hatori. Keep up teh good work. i'll read the other ones too.

ahahahahaha! they're caught by a camera! kawaii~

This is the best fanfiction I've ever read. Very romantic...

one of my fav guys is hatori and i like tohru and wud think its a good match for them to be together but its so awkward..but still nice fanfic