Truly and excellent bit of writing, very real and very poignant, and at the same time, everything is in character, bravo

I will go and see the rest of your work now :-)

Quite a mixture of sweetness and brutality. The last scene with Kagome was lovely and I appreciate the way reality/memory and one's point of view are expressed. Dog and dragons mating? What is the Inuyasha world coming to?
Nicely done.

I enjoyed this.

I liked it, even though the poignance was slightly saccahrine. I've always imagined Sesshoumaru's children to be captious and punctilious like him, but Kitsumi appears to be almost halcyon. This makes me think. Ugh, imprecations. I don't have time to excogitate anything pertaining to fandom. Well, I enjoyed it. 'Kay, bye.

(Renata)

that was great wonderful stupendous! and touching i can actually imagine that happening

~Al

now you've made me cry!

This... is beautiful, pure genius. So emotional, so perfectly portrayed, every character, even the OCs so... flowing to the last detail. As if they were always meant to be there.

So much left unsaid and, so many stories left untold, but it provides a depth to the story, knowing that there is so much more in the past. It's far deeper that can be portrayed in a short piece like this, or maybe at all.

Amazingly bittersweet. Thank you.

I can't explain it...I'm crying and laughing...

It's probably the best thing that I'm the only one up right now...

Beautiful...Simply beautiful...

leaving some love for this. I'm amazed at how well you did with a premise that always seems to go awry. Kitsumi is both delightful and believable, Kagome is perfectly IC, and Mama Higurashi bout made me cry.

Utterly fabulous.

Ahh. Perfect. Thank you for writing such a fresh original story.

wow. this is a really good story.

I really liked this piece. Some angst mixed with fluff made this story touching. I really enjoyed it. Although you spelled Sesshoumaru's daughter's name two ways. Katsumi and Kitsumi, I'm assuming Katsumi is the typo since most of the time you spell her name Kitsumi. Other then that everything was great.

why do your stories make me want to cry...? XD

wonderful as always.

I liked it very much and find Kitsumi's fastidiousness over admitting death, poverty and the senility of old age to Kagome's mother amusing. She was silly, for these things are not a tragedy. It was nice touch.

Creative and wonderful, I loved it. Not sad but also not suger happy, realistic.