Wow, that was very moving. I grew up with the saying, "Paint pictures with your words." This work is the realization of that. Beautiful.

Wow, I read this one after reading the similar one between Gaara and Naruto and it's amazing. This has to be my favorite. You captured Kakashi brilliantly in my opinion, and would make Kishimoto proud. I loved it. Their love, portrayed beautifully, and simply. Wonderful work, I look forward to reading more of your work!

wow this story was beautiful! It held so much emotions! really wonderful!

This was good. I liked it. Your words create a vivid, wonderful picture, and I like your metaphors. There's only one suggestion I have: I didn't know what the Japanese words were, and only _after_ the fic, when I read your author's notes, did I understand them. Perhaps it would be better to place the words and their english translations at the beginning of the fic? Just a thought, maybe something to think about for later fics. ;) Great fic.

This is a wonderful story. It's filled with a lot of good imagery and details. I especially like how you can put so many emotions into silence and small gestures. I hope you write more!

Excellent work. You captured the mood very well. Hope to see more of your stuff soon!

-MeeLee

Wonderfully written!

I love your stories, they evoke such lovely imageries. It was sweet and I think you handled Kakashi very well. I love the part about him being consicous about the tears in his vest. It reminds me so much of a school boy in front of his crush ^^ Great job!

Very nice piece. I love how you've written it because it's very emotive and evocative. Well done!
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CDW