that was such a gr8 story and i was hooked, it was one of the most gripping stories i have read! i was panicking at a couple points when i through something bad had or was going to happen.

i was jumping up and down screaming with joy at the end section! it was so gr8 and has made my day! and it's only the morning! lol

oh and by the way u have some words missing from the text and it kind of makes it weird to read, but u can just insert the word yourself. just through i would tell u.

Love NCISchick xoxoxoxoxo (aw TATE survived even through terrorist holding them hostage!:D:D:D!! - random i no! lolz!)

great story, really:D:D

Very cool I read the whole thing only stopped to watch a harrpy potter interview very cool story was confused at first and the whole idea of abby getting arested made me laugh

love it. i compleatly love it! fantastic job!!

if you do write a sequel (if you havn't already.. idk how long ago you posted this last chappie...), please email me!

Love it ! it was very well writen and very entrtaining!!

Aw! They had 2 kids! That's so cute! hehehehe

This was a fun story and I'm glad everything worked out! LOVED IT!

If you do have time for a sequel, I know that I look forward to reading it. :o)

tnx for completting this cute story!! i wish the show will go on at least until 2007!

tnx for updating= i'm happy tony is fine!

YAY! Tony's gonna be okay! hehehehe

Now, we need to reunite the two lovebirds!! hehehee

LOVING IT! More soon!!

Holy crud. I have one word: PROOFREAD! Specifically verb tenses and homophones.

Great story. Continue with writing.

Your story was only confusing at the beginning, just because it was hard to understand whether the characters were actual terroists or forced into it, that wasnt really clear in the beginning of the story. But now, everything is explained, and has come together, and personally i dont think its confusing anymore. Just at the beginning because, it seemed like we were coming into the story not from the beginning, its hard to explain. But honestly, now the story is really great, and im really getting into it. so keep going with it, because its really come together!!

Good Work

Love it!

I need more! Please let it be Tony! And what are people finding so confusing about this story? LOL Oh well...at least I understand what's going on. LOL

LOVING IT! More soon!

tnx for updating so fast. so- when will you reveille if it's tony?