*grins* when in doubt, ask mom, mwahaha! That was great!

And Viva Eddie!

Welcome back, Azzie. This was a nice update. The part that had me laughing the most is the bit where you ran down the list of people who turned him down for that loan. I enjoyed this chapter, good job.

--AlKahawliQ (100 Proof)

I love the chapter, really great.

- "At that three sofa cushions were flung at him in rapid succession, wherein Ryan somehow dodged the first two but was then creamed by the third, causing him to fall over and knock an rickety card table down along the way. “Take, that, **,” Dean said to him sorely."

- "“Yes, Ryan, I would say that’s a definite ‘no’ on the loan,” Dean said finally."

- "“You asked your MOM? Jesus Christ, you’re such a douchebag,” Dean said, passing by and stuffing potato chips in his mouth."

My favourites lines of the chapter. Great update Azrael, that was a sweet Eddie tidbit. Looking forward to the next update.

Nice tidbit. See you next update.

Loved this chapter a lot more than the first. Was laughing out loud a lot of the way through it, especially at Ryan's boss's story.

For me, this style shows a distinct similarity to Kevin Smith. I don't know if you are a fan of his work, but it's definitely a good thing.

Love
Katy
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I know you posted this last year, but I have been extremely lax in my reviewing (goddamn GAFF!) . Anyway, I liked this chapter it set the scene well.

Love
Katy
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XD Entertaining chapter, can't wait to read about the beatbox competition. Well written dude, keep up the good work!

Wow... just... wow... this is going to be a blast to read!

Nice chapter here. This was pretty funny. You know, the line that had me going was:

"I had to fill in for you, and when I got home after it I found out my wife walked out on me and took my dog with her! I lost two ** in one night!"

Now THAT'S how you do it! Hehehe

Good job, keep it up!

--AlKahawliQ (100 Proof)

Love the idea it's really funny. The story is really good. There really isn't enough male oc's in the world of wrestling fanfiction.

Nice idea! I've never heard of this before, it's very interesting definitely. Ryan seems like a right loser but Dean doesn't seem much better :-P And that'll prolly be good in providing masses of entertainment. Good chapter!

Very funny begining.

I liked this first chapter. I had to laugh at this guy. You know you're aiming high when your dream job is to be a WWE referee. Ha!

You know what, Az? I couldn't help but think of Spike Dudley when I was reading this. I dunno, it-it's just that I can just PICTURE ol' Spike as a loser in life. Ofttimes, I've thought of creating a fic where Spike would chronicle a day in his life, but the problem is that I'm having trouble trying to put that into a story format, ARGH!

Sorry to ramble, bad habit o'mine. You did a great job with this!

--AlKahawliQ (100 Proof)

That was funny. Poor Ryan is going to have a difficult time realizing his dream.