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| The End Of The Beginning 2007-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseWhat a great story. The ending was just...well, it was like Jackson said, "a million dollar moment." Loved it. Good job. --Nat |
| Fraxinus 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuseWonderful piece of work =) I love it ;) Just one thing: "damn the fact that this has now to happen now."-You added an extra "now" in there. |
| Discord Marie 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseAh! what a perfect moment... |
| Nickster25 2005-11-20 ch 1, | abuseo, ill definitely have to read the squel (ok i cant! spell) to this. very good! :D |
| Mangled Daisy 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI love it! The passionate parts were very tastefully written! This better not be a one-shot... |
| WormmonABC 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I think this was the first second-person story I've read on here. Generally I associate that voice with the corny Choose-Your-Own-Adventure books, but you seem to have pulled it off. Can't imagine the story in any other voice. |
| March 2005-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story is very well written. Your writing style is very poetic. You also captured the feeling of intensity between the two of them. Also, when he kisses her, it's not cute and fluffy; it seems to come from a need to hurt her and to end his attraction to her. Good job on this, can't wait to see more from you. :) |
| BregoBeauty 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abuseIntriging! Are you going to continue this? :) |
| dear toothy 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abuseyeah i like this too |
| No One Mourns the Wicked 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute! And yeah, nice ending. XD Poor Lise, having dear old dad walk in on her and her abductor. ~Ashley |
| Mini Nicka 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abuseLoved that! |
| Danielle Anderson 2005-11-10 ch 1, | abuseI liked the fic. It was great and darkly funny. It's amusing to imagine if the alternate ending did take place in the movie. |