 meldinap 2009-06-01 . chapter 22Awe so adorable! |
 hooked-on-harry 2009-02-15 . chapter 5Hey, first of all, i want to thank you for being the best ever Hermione/Draco writer. You are an inspiration. I love these stories, especially this one and it's prequel.
Second of all, not to be a perfectionist or anything, but i have been to Italy recently and my mum is Italian, and I just noticed a few mistakes I thought you should know about.
1. When Draco asked the ferry man if he spoke English, you wrote "Parlate Inglese?" This isn't often said anymore. What they say now is "Parla/Parle Inglese?"
2. When Draco asked for a table for two, you wrote "tabella". A 'tabella' is actually a chart, like what you would do on Microsoft Excel, or something. The proper term for table is "tavolo".
3. Last one. I don't know whether it was a typo, but when Draco asked for a bottle of red wine, you said "bitingly". This word is not actually Italian, as it is not in the Italian dictionary. The term for "bottle" is "bottiglia".
Please don't hate me, I was just trying to be helpful! I love your stories! |
 rjc312443 2008-11-09 . chapter 22can i find a better fic than this ?
never ...
jus luv it...
itz so damn nice and has a pinch of everything in it...
u rock!
ur fic has made my wonderful lyf(my crush has asked me out! whoopsey!) even more wonderful... |
 KoRnChildG 2008-08-04 . chapter 21Aww, and he looks like his Daddy. I also hate it when people name sons after their fathers. I agree with Hermione. I liked the baby's name.
The story with Draco's mom and Hermione's dad was an interesting twist. I just wish her dad had seen past that and at least had the decency to be there for his own daughter. Oh well. Great story! |
 KoRnChildG 2008-08-04 . chapter 19“how odd will it be to have a little ferret running around.”
HAHA! They're evil. XD |
 KoRnChildG 2008-08-04 . chapter 14So it was her. Well, I'm glad they got back in time to help. |
 KoRnChildG 2008-08-04 . chapter 12Hermione's co-worker? |
 KoRnChildG 2008-08-04 . chapter 11That was unexpected, but it's a good twist. I think it was starting to become too much of a routine life for them. Not that I'm complaining. XD |
 KoRnChildG 2008-08-04 . chapter 10I love the Phantom of the Opera! I was actually lucky enough to see it live in NYC. I say lucky because I live in California. Although the musicals are great in San Francisco, the two that I got to see in NYC are still my favorite. |
 monketprobs 2008-06-12 . chapter 22wow i have read all your stories and they are all amazing! |
 ahhGirllxx 2008-06-05 . chapter 22LOVE IT! |
 KKM 2008-01-12 . chapter 22That was such a cute story! ^^ |
 mitch365 2007-12-03 . chapter 22i was close to tears of joy so sweet i love that story and i love all your stories i have read
please write more stories if you have time and a final story in the enchanted series (its wat i call this and the story before) would make my day bright, though if you dont think it will improve the enchanted series dont write it (like if it will be like the sequals of jaws)
you really can write well done love you stories cant wait to read more even though it 12:30am and i have school tomorrow so im gonna start on a new story of YOURS cos i LOVE them ALL
thanx you are an incredible writer
PS - i always worry if i think the author will think im being sarcastic, well im not i am being sincere these are great stories you have written, on to the next one |
 Mishavay 2007-09-12 . chapter 22very cute. :D |
 Aisling Malfoy 2007-07-17 . chapter 22you are a stunning writer. please write a trilogy, it would make my day! ive read this story before and loved it just as much as i do now!
continue writing!
xoxo aisling |