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| Riana1 2006-04-19 ch 11,  | abuseA wonderful romp in all. Thanks for a great IMan story. |
| Riana1 2006-04-19 ch 10, | abuseJamie, thy name is wunderkind. You are a talented writer, nut Jamie is not so much a characters as a serious Plot Device. Some background would be nice here. |
| Riana1 2006-04-19 ch 9, | abuseJamie is channeling Carrie whoa. |
| Riana1 2006-04-19 ch 8, | abuseWow... that works on so many levels. I can fell the blood pumping. |
| Riana1 2006-04-19 ch 7, | abuseGoing from bad to worse is an understatement. You really throw out those plot twists, don't you. |
| Riana1 2006-04-19 ch 6, | abuseThe mind sex was a bit much; you have a great talent for reaching wonderful scenes but not fully connecting them with the plot. |
| Riana1 2006-04-19 ch 5, | abuseI swear you should write for the show-- last bit was killer. |
| Riana1 2006-04-19 ch 4, | abuseYou seriously write action /well/. |
| Riana1 2006-04-19 ch 3, | abuseShort but sweet. You have action now. |
| Riana1 2006-04-19 ch 2, | abuseTelepaths are trouble- and I had to say it, Claire likes Bob-by, Claire likes Bob-by, Claire likes Bob-by, hey. |
| Riana1 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseWhat a way to begin Claire calling the Offical an **. Perfect. |
| Lightmastercheese 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abusethis story needs more gang rape. Please read and review my fics I need some CONCRIT BABY! |