That was an incredible piece of writing. You've probably heard this lots of times but it's always nice to hear it once more: You are an amazing writer. I have a question...the little italic parts..very poetic...was that a poem that sounds very familiar or is it your own work?
This review isn't anywhere near worthy enough to tell you how utterly amazing this was...I'm checking out your profile!

Wonderful, excellent, amazing, all the words that I've used before to describe your writing apply here. I love you, and I love your writing. You are so amazingly talented, like you wouldn't believe. I am planning on writing a House/Cuddy oneshot and I don't even want to now that I've read your writing. I hope I can be 1/4 as good as you. Seriously. You make me amazingly happy with your writing.

And yes, I've said this before, but I can't wait for the next chapter of "The Land of Qualms" because the last one was excellent. Of course.

Oh, by the way, I found this story because I was going through my profile and found out all the people who have me on their favorite story/author list. I decided to take a look at this story, and I'm so glad I did. You have an amazing writing voice. You use an amazing array of vocabulary and your descriptions are so visual that I can see what is happening in this story. I loved it.

Well, it is somewhat late, and tomorrow I must head to the s-word (school), where they are out to ruin my life. Therefore, I'm going to end this here. I shall return soon enough, whenever you get that next chapter up!! ::Wink, wink, nudge, nudge::. See you soon

(:.:) cookies by review are the best kind (:.:)
Grade: A +
Number of times I used amazing or some form of it: 5 (unofficially) =]

Have a wonderful night!

Lijep

Everyone one of your fics, chapters, leave me with this sense of wonder. I'll refrain from using the word complete because that sounds a little weird, but just keep in mind that, that's the feeling I do experience when reading your fics.

Okay, maybe your FICS are the ones that are complete. Yes, that's better formulated than my previous statement. Okay, yes, there's a wonderful beginning-middle-end and more importantly, there's a purpose to your writing, which is greatly appreciated.

When your thoughts are clear to you, they are clear to us. One can tell that you yourself, respect your work very much, because it shows in the quality that you present.

This piece was no exception. You have a great talent of fusing poetic images with the character actions, which really creates a unique style that is enviable.

Thanks so much for sharing this. Wonderful as always. (Glad to see you on LJ!)

beautifully written!

Wow! I don't watch House, but I was reading your profile, and this title caught my eye. It was wonderful! The descriptions and everything...as I said before, just wow! To quote one of your reviews to me, Dramatic irony is king! But, really, all irony is just great.
I don't agree with the reviewers that said this was too hard to understand. It wasn't, and the metaphors in this story were what made it so great.
Although, since I'm addicted to CSI and all, I do agree with lemonjelly and Lizzy. You need to write a CSI fic!! Please?
Well, I think this is officially the longest review I've ever written (although I know it's short compared to some you've written. LOL!). Anyway, great job!

I utterly agree with Lizzy. Where is your legendary CSI stuff? I know you've got some...

But as for this... This was brilliant. I can see where people are coming from on the complicated issue but I've got Green Tea in a mug, Bob Dylan playing and can easily handle it. It's like reading East of Eden by John Steinback - I found that quite a heavygoing book - it took a lot of head-work, if ya know what I mean, but I knew it was worth it because the essential story, the mood it created and the finished effect was just so awe-inspiringly wonderful.

And you have done very very well with this. I like the "diamon hidden in the peasant's shawl" metaphor, but my favourite line - or lines - has to be the ending.

"How melancholic, how uncouth, how logical, how jovial, how civil, how ironic.

How ironic."

Perhaps I just love the repetition of "how ironic" to very neatly finish it off and pound an idea home to you. And perhaps I just so love the word "uncouth" - it sounds out so nicely.

(But anyway, "ironical" is a word, foolish reviewer - look it up on dictionary dot com.)

Metaphors. Hmmpf.

Oh well. I did understand it better than the first chapter of your first House fanfic. That's not too ironic.

But hey, metaphorical writing is your style. I don't know what my style is. It's just...I don't know...see, at least you KNOW what yours is! It was a good one-shot. :)

YOU NEED TO DO A CSI FANFICTION! THIS HOUSE STUFF IS...not working...I mean, it is, but I'm not as into House as CSI and I REALLY WANT YOU TO MAKE A CSI ONE! PLEASE! {beg}

Wow...artsy, lol. Very strange, but you wouldn't have written it like that if that's not what you were intending. If that makes any sense. Nice style, anyway.

I thought the idea behind this was very good, although I do agree with Ks. Sometimes just writing a story as it comes to you is the best way to go. Your writing is complex and at times can be confusing with the need to read over passages for a second or even third time to truly understand what is it you are trying to tell. Maybe it's just your way and this is only one person's opinion so please don't take it too hard.

hi, you need to simplify your stories, your're overdoing by making it artistic. i wasn't even sure i was reading about house and cuddy. you're a great writer, it just doesn't suit these two chracters. sorry

oh wow.
very...ironical?
seriously cant think of words to describe this. Melancholy it was.
you really love all your metaphors and Irony dont you...i actually had to read over some parts twice to understand it properly! LOL
thats not cool...!