Quite an interesting story I like it.

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A interesting story. Do update soon.

This is a very good story. I really can't wait for the next update! It'll be interesting to see how the Scoobies get to the Mountain and how they explain to Kara and Cassie what they are. Also, I find it interesting that Willow does not yet know that there is another Slayer at the Mountain.

A couple of things, though. Sharon's last name has 2 i's at the end. And a fortnight is 2 weeks, not one.

Wonderful as ever. Yes I did see where you were going with the Colonial remnant's origin, but rather than be disapointed I'm actually quite pleased to see the story develop as it is. Now I'm looking forward to seeing some more meddling from Willow and what will come from that.

Wonderful crossover, our have really blended them together in an intresting and capturing way!

Its so wonderful that you've wrote more of this super story, more
please. Thanks

Hmm, now that is a twist at the end there...

It makes one wonder just how good a cylon model is at being human, if they're all slayers, if thats really even Kara, if the first Kara died or was resqued, why Jack had a second or extra transponder if thats indeed what it was, if not who the 7th transponder was from.

Really this was just a lot of cruel things to drop at the end. Taking all the assumptions one could draw up to that point and twisting.

"Why a spoon cousin", "Because its Dull you twit, it'l hurt more."

great story cant wait for the update

Well its nice that O'Neill was smart enough not to lead the cylons to earth itself. Its going to be fun explaining away leading the colonial fleet into an ambush that way. Its also a cute touch to see how the system lords and the cylons will get along. And of course there's God to consider as well with his two slayers.

I'm really starting to wonder how long youve had Frasier being a slayer, and how much she knows given that she doesnt seem to be having strength control issues like Kara did.

oh and you might have had fun with buttons and cloths tearing trying to get used to strength beyond strength.

I have to say that I am really impressed by this story. The way its been put together, the thought behind it, the writing, and charachterization are all absolutely wonderful. I hope to see more soon as its swiftly become my favorite multi-cross of the genre. I've also read a fair number. You might want to go to http : // w . tthfanfic . com (or if thats removed) search Twisting the Hellemouth. Its a sight for Buffy fanfiction, and while there is not a lot of buffy in this yet (or possibly ever) it would fit in the crossovers secitons quite easily.

In any case Congradulations on such a great story and I'll definitely be reading till the end.

I didn't get the joke either.

I’d agree that the Buffy elements aren’t prominent enough to keep this story in Buffy crossovers It’s still not something you should drop but not enough to make it a Buffy based story. I have a few issues with some of the points, such as the dismissal of demons and vampires by SG-1 and I probably wouldn’t have thrown Cassie and Mini-Jack together like you have (possibly had SG-1 more in the forefront of the plot from the start but that’s just me.
I’ve read this (or at least the original version) before and liked it but since then there has been a spade full of SG-1/BSG2003 crossovers and each one has the Colonials torturing a lead character thinking their a Cylon spy. This is my main issue and what takes up this review
It pretty much shows every part I hate about the current BSG; paranoia, gross stupidity and the amazing arrogance of the whole lot of them. As an enlightened (I hope) Human (that’s questionable) I’m stunned at just how incredibly silly the BSG cast are. The only ray’s of hope are Helo (with an ounce of brain matter) and Lee in the later two seasons (after he demolishes the Pegasus). I’m sorry but writing your heroes as stupid arrogant morons to make some over obvious point about our own modern society isn’t my idea of a good story.
The reason I bring this up for your story is that I really hope that in your rewrite you go back over the scene in question. If you could remove it, or alter it, in such away that when the slow dim light of understanding does dawn in Starbucks eyes we don’t end up with endless chapters of recrimination and blame. Quite frankly we have seen it all before and it’s oh so subtle point is not one intelligent readers need spelling out again and again.
I don’t usually go into this much detail, when I do it’s because I think it’s a great story with scope and a structure that deserves time and attention. And when a small thing gets in the way it really needs to be addressed. This is a great story and personally, with these niggles fixed, I think it will be better.

Mountain King

great to hear from you

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Holy fraking frak. This story is made out of all kinds of awesome.

Update? Please?

Nice. I can't wait to read more. :)