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diamondkat12
2008-03-26
ch 40,
abuseThis is one of my favorite Sarkney stories. No matter how patient Vaughn is I doubt he can go up against Sark and Sydney and win.
Loisen
2006-09-10
ch 5,
abuse“One Night in Sydney"
:-)
Agent Pheonix
2006-08-15
ch 40,
abuselove it!
ganainm
2006-04-25
ch 40,
abuseThis story is *sweet*

Exceptionally well written, great plot, and well organized. You expect a certain level of intelligence from your readers, which is respectable.
elle6778
2006-04-23
ch 40,
abuseFantastic story! I loved the plot, how it all seemed so believable. Sark's character was particularly well written. I like it that you didn't make him go all soft on the outside. Well done on completing the story!
qblisa
2006-02-11
ch 40,
abuseWow!! You have an amazing imagination!! The way you used the entire history of Alias to weave this wonderful story... just brillant!!

The character interaction was well written, the storyline was brillant. It is a shame that there was a resolution so quick. She only wanted money (which is fair enough), but what about the build up with Daniel Well? I thought that Sark and him would have a one-on-one and Sark would reinforce his superiority. And I didn't like how Sydney seemed to be caught so easily, twice. Oh well, as I said, great character development and storyline.

I love your preference to a Sark/Sydney match, rather then Sydney/Vaughn.

I love your stories, this one especially.
Please write more.
Cheers ;)
Beauty in my Breakdown
2006-02-11
ch 40,
abusewoah, this is an amazing story you've spun. Update soon!
southern cross
2006-01-30
ch 40,
abusewhat a way to end it! i read and reread the line you quoted and simply couldn't believe that she sent that to him!

i mean he was so right in thinking that the cruel package came from sark, but it came from her and just wow...

this chapter is probably the best written vaughn that i have read. i can't stand him and even i felt...something...for him.

i can't believe it's over, but then is it?

awesome work!

~Sara~
southern cross
2006-01-30
ch 39,
abusethat was so beautiful. and they are together! well sort of. the time jump got me. i just can't believe that his mom just let them go and they ran away together.

how wonderful. the riding was so detailed. i felt syd's sore muscles it was so well written.

can't wait to see what else is happening to them.

~Sara~
southern cross
2006-01-30
ch 38,
abusewoo hoo! i love the bit in the car! she flicked his ear. giggled aloud at that.

i am still at a loss where you are heading with irina. i really don't believe she was just using him for only the money. just seems beneath her somehow, but i'll just be patient.

love when you do multiple chap updates cause i'm off to read more.

~Sara~
truglasgowgal
2006-01-30
ch 40,
abusedamn!
ok majorly freaky last para, the fortune cookie an all that i mean! ;)
def cant wait ta read the next part - please post it soon!
i seriously am in awe of your writing capabilities - how you can write so much, so well, an in such a short space of time! - i praise you totalle! :P
steph
x
:D
phi4858
2006-01-30
ch 40,
abuseDoes your last sentence really mean you've finished this story? Sad thing but I'm pleased Sark and Sydney are together. Hope Vaughn will in vain wait with patience for Sydney. Finally she sent him the wedding band.

Thanks for your story. Will you post other ones?
bluebear-74
2006-01-29
ch 40,
abuseI'm sad it's finished, but Im very glad that Sark and Sydney ended up together. Love Sark teaching her to ride, Sark would seem to be one that would be very ** you.
equisetum
2006-01-29
ch 40,
abuseA cryptic ending: Sark is patient, Vaughn is bitter and still wears his wedding ring. I must admit I'm a little disappointed, but a happy ending with no loose strings just wouldn't be appropriate for the story. Does Jack know where Sydney is?
Brilliant piece.
equisetum
2006-01-29
ch 39,
abuseI'm not sure what I expected of them. Normal wasn't it, and this odd coexistence in Chicago suits them somehow, however twisted and fragile it may be. Is Sydney really freelancing, in the espionage field? I didn't expect her ever teach, she's so far from the person who wanted that. Law, though, may suit her.
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