It's a great begining. I always like when people describe how Unit 01 goes berserk. I find it thrilling. One thing I'll criticize about is the shortness of the chapter. I think it might work better as a prologue. In the next chapter I hope you start with the romance between Asuka and Shinji.

Where is the rest of the story?
U have to keep on writting.

very good for an opening chapter continue

good story looking forward to reading more

This certianly has my attention. Lets see, we have Shinji out cold in a berserk Unit-01, what I have to asume is a mangled and broken Unit-02, and Unit-01 going through the armor above the Geofront. WTF?! The question of timeline comes to mind. I would guess that this is post 3I, given the observers, or possibly just before, but that really doesnt explain Rei. Well, looks like we are going to have to wait til you update to find out what exactly is going on.

Interesting...Are u going to make this a ReixKaoru ficcy in addition to a AxS? Update Soon!

Pyramidgirl89

Looks like an interesting start, I look forward to seeing more of the story.

Oh, all cliff hangy! This chapter rocks! Seriously, it has this feeling to it that i can't really describe, me likes! Please post more soon, or i'll have to shank you! >_0

Good intro! I'll be reading a lot more if you write heaps of chapters. Heaps of chapters makes a story really good (as long as you know what you're talking about). Awesome work.

Cheerio,
Naon

This is well writen and I Love the descrition you have entered in this writing... More of the story would be appreciated. Keep up the good work and remember to send me more story! ;)!

Looking good so far, hopefully you'll keep up the writing standard which you've set in this chapter for the rest of the story.

Everything seems confusing now, but I guess things will be cleared up in upcoming chapters. I look forward to them.

Yes...This story seems very promising...I left me wanted to read more...
So the boy who was unconscious...it was shinji right...that made me kinda scare. Also, the time phrase. When is this suppose to happen. In what gap...well, i guess will find out later on. Keep on writing.
High Hopes Here

Danny
P.S. Shinji and Asuka! YAY!