 WitchVela 2009-11-04 . chapter 51i'll give james a second chance - just like harry. if he doesn't live up to it, severus will see to it, that he gets his punishment, i am sure XD
nice ending of the book. |
 WitchVela 2009-11-04 . chapter 50i KNEW it! it really IS regulus XD
dumbles STILL doesn't give up. he disgusts me.
severus is funny in his protectivness XD
poor percy. but at least he chose for himself (i hope). |
 WitchVela 2009-11-04 . chapter 49loved all the bonding-scenes in here. i would never have thought that draco would be so open and forward to say that he loved harry. those scenes just warmed my heart XD
never suspected narcissa to be starborn - great job in concealing that fact. |
 WitchVela 2009-11-04 . chapter 48so much happened in this chapter. harry is from now on truly not an innocent anymore. the last barrier (killing) is behind him. i hope he'll stay strong. |
 WitchVela 2009-11-04 . chapter 47i hope connor will stay that way as he is in this chapter and improve further.
now it is kind of obvious that harry is definitely the boy-who-lived. it's true that through dumbles manipulation connor COULD become the one, but i think it unlikely.
i believe that the elder must be severus or draco. i think it's more draco, because he already loves harry so fiercely and that love will change soon to the love of a lover. |
 WitchVela 2009-11-04 . chapter 46wow, that was intense at the end. you write good action-scenes.
i am kind of sorry for sirius, but i am happy to see, that in the end he stood up for his mistakes and ended the sacrifice-sycle with his own sacrifice for once.
now i want to see how connor will react to harry. i hope he isn't STILL a stupid git after getting that much truths.
i am also kind of glad that the connection between the brothers is severed. i think it's a just punishment for connor, because he never deserved harry's love after going against him so often. i am only sorry for harry. |
 WitchVela 2009-11-04 . chapter 45i start to like the voice. i hope i don't have to take those words back by the end of this book XD
perhaps it is regulus? he definitely felt a lot of pain. |
 WitchVela 2009-11-04 . chapter 44i STILL don't believe it's peter - and IF he is it, than only because someone controls him. furthermore the phoenix web returned to him and that means, i think, that he wouldn't harm those loyal to dumbles. that wouldn't make any sense.
connor was his stupid self again. |
 WitchVela 2009-11-04 . chapter 43draco was funny in here.
i don't believe that it is peter, who hurt severus and wrote a letter to lucius. it must be someone else. i wouldn't be surprised if it is sirius. i don't buy his story of trying to apologize. |
 Lulu 2009-11-03 . chapter 1 Hello,
I just wanted to drop you a review telling you that I am completely blown away by your incredible story arc. I really have no words.. but I can say that this is the best fanfiction I have ever (will ever) read.
You have my heartfelt thanks for creating something so intricate and beautiful and sharing it with the world.
Love,
lulu |
 WitchVela 2009-11-03 . chapter 42now i want to kiss harry for realising all this things, severus always knew. i am so happy to see that harry himself calls connor an idiot (finally).
i don't think peter lied, so it must have been a plot of dumbles again. furthermore, starborn explicitly recommended to harry to trust him and i have faith in him.
harry just can't stop having other entitys in his mind, does he? XD |
 WitchVela 2009-11-03 . chapter 41woah, harry really changed a lot after his web was destroyed. he is constantly evolving. it's awesome to see. |
 WitchVela 2009-11-03 . chapter 40good. now connor finally got 3 different views on himself. the git really needed to be told that he is stupid and a wanker XD
it's funny seeing zacharias and hermione starting to have a tentative friendship. |
 WitchVela 2009-11-03 . chapter 39i totally forgot about starborn asking harry to seek why sirius never went to azkaban.
it gets interesting. and lucius is still getting threatened. i hope this time he'll confide in narcissa. |
 WitchVela 2009-11-03 . chapter 38i soo want to kiss draco right now. he should punch connor a bit more XD
but he also should start lessening his possessive behaviour over harry. if I had such a friend, i would have been quite angry after some time with him. he'll smother harry with his behaviour. |