good story love the idea update soon

sweet story and very engaging :o)
You are a good writer!

Slán leat! *g*

Aww, what an awesome ending. I first figured it was Sesshy gone soft, but it makes one hell of a lot more sense with it being his vati. Kawaii!

~Miko-chan

Oh la la lol. This is sehr cool. I like how it's only confusing if you think really hard about it, otherwise if you read it simply it's ok. Poor Rin. :(

~Miko-chan

that was very good. I liked your detail and raw emotions in the story. Rin is one of my favorite characters in fanfics. good job.

The Inu no Taishou! (big grin) Wonderful. I loved the way you created him, the way he spoke to Rin. Thanks very much!

i like your story continue i wonder what will be going on next! thanks and see you soon! have fun!

Ah, this was good ^_^ I liked it. Poor Rin, being scared and confused in the beginning.

Ooh, interesting. I liked the slow realisation that she'd died - and then looking up into golden eyes at the end. (aww...) The revelation unfolding was well done.

The only thing I'd point out is that you spelt 'liaison' incorrectly...

Interesting... update soon! I want to know what on earth is going on! *extremly confused*

Seems very interesting so u need to update quickly so that maybe u can getr more reviews ohk.. i like it a lot so far... can't wait for the next chappie

Wow. That was so evil of you, stopping there like that..tsk, tsk, tsk. Haha, please continue! You may want to get just a *tiny* (you've pretty much got it down pat) bit more detailed. I keep seeing fog when I imagine the setting...is there fog?
Oh, well. Great story, and keep it comin'! Oh, how we love Little Rin!

wow, thats really sad...
i like the way you wrote it. so, update...