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| Taraah36 2008-07-07 ch 1,  | abusethat poor girl no woman around at all to explain it to her she had every right to feel that way update soon |
| Tjix 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseIncredibly well-written, in character, and sweet. Poor Rin! I know exactly how terrified she is--but she had no one to explain it to her! Poor baby! It's a good thing Sesshomaru is tactful, if nothing else. And he cares about her. That's worth a great deal. Beautifully done. Ja ne, Tjix |
| sessyrin700 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseawsome will you make a next chapter? please do! |
| Bob Da Peach 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abusebob do like, she does she does *grins* Reiycheru good writer she is she is :D good detail and in depth description uh ha uh ha me lkes me do :D |
| LatinAnimePrincess 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseYOU HAVE TO UPDATE!! OH PLEASE UPDATE!! THIS IS SOO GOOD. SESSHY'S THOUGHTS WERE FUNNY! It is true, women go crazy that time of month... lol! |
| anonymous 2007-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abusei like it; it ended too abruptly though. you must continue! =) |
| RayGirl91 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuse-Le gasp- O.O Will you update? ._. The descriptions flowed very well, and the characterizations were great! Sesshoumaru's thoughts were a bit amusing too. x3 |
| M.S.K 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseoh this looks promising, please have another chapter or 2 or more! |
| PPE 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abusehey, that was really good. i like how you left it as a cliff hanger. the reader gets to fill in the ending. very good story. |
| KatzEye 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abusethe plot of the story is interesting. i do like luv ur writting style. you put so much detail into it. it seemed as if i was Sesshomaru looking for Rin. Great Job! |
| sugarsweet pie 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abusei wonder what will happen! the concept is always seen in lots of different visions, and this ones really good! hope everythings ok! |
| HooterSampzon13 2005-11-24 ch 1, | abuseWow... |
| Sesshy's dream girl 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abusehey write a new chapter like Sesshomaru goin to Kagome for help or somthing PLEASE |
| J 2005-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally good, is lord sessohmaru going to go to kagomae and ask for help? Please, i want to know what will happen to rin and her period thing, please do the next chapter |
| KasperLassie 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abuseGo on, go on. I need to know what happens otherwise YOU WILL GET VERY ANGRY REVIEWS FROM A VERY STRESSED PERSON! Now continue. |