This is my favorite one of any of the other "Comeing of age" stories involving Sesshomaru and Rin. You didn't make it absuredly dramatic and everyone was in character. Yay!

that poor girl no woman around at all to explain it to her she had every right to feel that way update soon

Incredibly well-written, in character, and sweet. Poor Rin! I know exactly how terrified she is--but she had no one to explain it to her! Poor baby! It's a good thing Sesshomaru is tactful, if nothing else. And he cares about her. That's worth a great deal.
Beautifully done.

Ja ne,
Tjix

awsome will you make a next chapter? please do!

bob do like, she does she does *grins*

Reiycheru good writer she is she is :D

good detail and in depth description uh ha uh ha

me lkes me do :D

YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!! OH PLEASE UPDATE!! THIS IS SOO GOOD. SESSHY'S THOUGHTS WERE FUNNY! It is true, women go crazy that time of month... lol!

i like it; it ended too abruptly though. you must continue! =)

-Le gasp- O.O Will you update? ._. The descriptions flowed very well, and the characterizations were great! Sesshoumaru's thoughts were a bit amusing too. x3

oh this looks promising, please have another chapter or 2 or more!

hey, that was really good. i like how you left it as a cliff hanger. the reader gets to fill in the ending. very good story.

the plot of the story is interesting. i do like luv ur writting style. you put so much detail into it. it seemed as if i was Sesshomaru looking for Rin. Great Job!

i wonder what will happen! the concept is always seen in lots of different visions, and this ones really good! hope everythings ok!

Wow...

hey write a new chapter like Sesshomaru goin to Kagome for help or somthing PLEASE

Really good, is lord sessohmaru going to go to kagomae and ask for help? Please, i want to know what will happen to rin and her period thing, please do the next chapter