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Kitty Invictus
2007-12-27
ch 1,
abuseAwesome, Amazing. I can't really say much more. This was a good little collection of thoughts from Lee. It was perfect. I'm beginning to think that I'm gonna sit her all night reading your stories. cause, Frak they're good. Well anyway. fraking good piece of work.

-kitty
Hell-of-Fire
2006-03-15
ch 1,
abuseTHIS is so COOL! I started to take notes which parts I liked best and the first one was:

*Within the first two minutes of conversation, Kara had loudly labeled him a ‘cocky bastard who probably had a stick shoved so far up his ** that he could cough it out’ and then promptly pushed him into the pool in Caroline Adama’s backyard.*

But then I had to give up cause almost every sentense was worth it! Really love this little piece, thanks for writing it, and thanks for mentioning that song, like it very much!
Lymiryc
2005-11-13
ch 1,
abusewonderful, love it. Great insight, lovely delivery. Good tie up at the end. Thank you for simple elegance.
crimson75
2005-11-12
ch 1,
abuseDid I ever told you how much I love your storys? I really do. *g*

There are a hundred reasons why Lee Adama should not love her. There are a thousand reasons why he does not love her. There are a million reasons why he cannot help but love her.

Yepp, and he cannot but want it this way.
Tracyj23
2005-11-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, that was absolutely beautiful! Brilliant! Spot on depiction of Lee's feelings.

I loved it. Now a sequel perhaps, about why Kara loves him... :)
the-hinotori
2005-11-12
ch 1,
abuseWell structured and dare I say it absolutely fantastic story.

I can think of a million reasons why someone should love it. I'm pushing for 1 for why anyone could fault it.
abelard
2005-11-11
ch 1,
abuseGod, this is SUCH a beautiful fic. I *love* your version of Kara/Lee and hope you write LOTS more fic about them. You are very talented.
annpo
2005-11-11
ch 1,
abuseI'm not sure what to write. That was profound... ..must have struck a chord with me somewhere I think.

So, how does he break the cycle of sadism she practises on him? Or is it the cycle of masochism he allows her to get away with.

Strikes me, that anyone as strong as Kara Thrace really wans someone to take charge. To take the responsibility for her emotional dysfunction away from her and just let her FEEL without FEAR.

God, it's Saturday afternoon and I'm waxing phychological...ek

Anyway, great story, thought provoking, up to your usual high standard.
Nytel
2005-11-11
ch 1,
abuseThat was fraking amazing. I loved it so much. Thank you. :)
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