in the honour of Princess Eirika
[In the service?]

Her tears had all been fallen.
[‘had all fallen’ would have had a better flow]

Princesses head.
[princess’s]

Short but reminds me eerily of military funerals, particularly capturing the hollow and hypocritical feel of them.

Okay, can you say SAD! But why wasn't Erika the last one to leave? Is Franz gay in this story? Was he in love with Seth? Please answer my questions.

Bravo... a short and sorrowful tale that should be continued. The only thing I don't like is your hinting at yaoi. Believe me, Franz does NOT like Seth that way.

To all our veterens,alive and dead...Thank you.

That's so sad. My grandfather was in WW2 and he was a baker. I'm adding this to favourites. *Sob*

A very meaningful fic. Beautifully done. *pins a poppy to this fic*

Never Forget.

I'm not normally one for angst, but seeing as how it's Rememberance Day and all...

Very sad, but also very well-deserving of today. Good job, keep it up.

The soldiers would be honored. It was a nice fic in any case, but the fact that it was written for the many soldiers who died, and the ones who lived, puts the real heart behind it.

I'm not one to read ficcishes like this, but the title attracted me to it. O_o But this brought me to tears. Poor Seth. He has to be the only Jeigan I seem to like. >>; 'Cause most of them are just...ehh.

Please, do write more drabbles like this. X3

That was pretty sad. A little short but very tragic nevertheless.
~Lemurian-Girl~