Wow! Finally another chapter! YAY! Are you going to be updating regularly? Even if not, I still liked the chapter and I'll keep waiting for updates... however long they may take...

You know that Yusuke is going to not only kill Toguro, he's going to make him a prime example on why it's not cool to mess with the person that he loves the most!!

THANK YOU! I love this story so much please update again soon!

this is a wonderful story. please say you hadn't given up on it. It's so original and creative. I love it wholeheartedly!! Whenever you can please update

omg can you update already pleasedee

I'm realy enjoying this story line. It's sad, angsty and very emotional. But, I have to admit that I usually only read and write yaoi fics, yet, occasionally I'll read a Keiko/Yusuke pairing if the summary interests me. Yusuke is my favorite character, so I don't mind him in a het pairing as long as the story is interesting and includes sex, lol. A nakified Yusuke always works in my book ^_~ Anyway, I wanted to say how much I like what you're doing with this story.

I do have a constructive critique however. As good as the story line is, it would read a lot better if there were not so many grammatical and spelling errors. It takes away from the flow of the story. That tends to annoy readers. I only mention this because I know that with a good beta or even just re-reading the chapter over to yourself, you would see the mistakes and want to correct them. If you did that then you would really set this fic on a more professional level.

Please take this as advise given from one author to another. Keep up the interesting story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Good Luck ^_^

Hugs and Kisses
Kogas Hentai Luver

oh come on! please update pretty please! please please please please please please please! i love this story! :)

OMG! I loved it! Please, please, please, PLLEEAASSEE update soon!

this is a good story, although it could use a little common sense and a little more of a plot besides a yelling leader. otherwise its great. moo.

good fic well writtian even though i dont like rape stories but i do from time to time like sad ones so it's all guud and i ment to spell guud like that keep up the guud work and i hope there'll be another lime/lemon =^0_0^= YOU cant resist the KITTY
Urameshii Keiko

please update this story you havent updated it in forever and i really really miss it! please! its a great story! :)

Woah, this story is tragic! But it's really great! I feel so sorry for poor Keiko. Yusuke better kill Tuguro! ARRGH! I'M SO MAD AT HIM! Great story! I'll be reading.

this is a great story! i feel so bad for keiko being raped and all. i hope things get better. that damn Toguro has to pay and knowing yusuke he will. update soon plz! :)

aww poor keiko... anywayz im glad u updated !

kinda dark, but i love it!!
please update soon!