GREATISSIMO!

loved it...though I hope you'll do a sequel! Very nice piece of story!

Great chapter :) I like that you have Alec accepting the relationship between Max and Ames. When can we expect to see Logan's reaction?! I can't wait for the next chapter!

wow, i really have to say i like this story the best outa all the max/white stories. nice job, hope u update soon.

This chapter is so so so so so good! I do hope you'll update soon! Very good the part where Ames cares about the baby! I would have liked him to kick Thula's ** more...

I'm really loving this story! Will the LA gang will be sticking around in the story? I think you did a great job writing this and I can't wait for the next update! :)

hey! Nice chapter! really good!! I really like the universe of Angel...If you could like explain how they met, you know, it would be good...
I don't know if you followed my advice, but it's more descriptive than before...And I like it more now...
I know I'm a bit overbearing but if you could even be more descriptive...:) if you don't understand (it's not a critic, at least not a mean one) mail me up at sitadarkangel@wanadoo.fr...

Anyway : REALLY GOOD CHAPTER

Hey...yay! angel's crossover! like the storeyline...so does this men Wesley can also come? huh? huh? please? Lol...

Rela

Great start! I can't wait to see where you take this story. Update soon please!

Interesting...You might try to put more descriptions in your story...
Anyway I'm a sucker for M/W fics...So well keep writing this!

I think this chapter is a bit too short for my liking, although it does have potential ;) -- draw out the chase, the fight, describe the character feelings, create conversation/argument etc to give this story more depth.

And is there any chance of this story being continued? The title has me interested -- possible prophesy (sp?) of White turning against his own kind etc. the possibilities of a prophesy with Max and White are limitless.

with a re-write of chapter one, i think this could turn into a great story, so keep up the good work! ;)

"she will 'BARE' the special one"

If you mean she will "BEAR" a child - then change the spelling.

"BARE" means: Lacking the usual or appropriate clothing; naked: a bare arm.

"BEAR" means" To give birth to:

You're welcome.