Hmm...I don't really mind any Tenchi pairing, but this I HAD to read. I just adore Starlight Express, and that missing line in the song is: "Only he could make my burden light". Kudos to you, because this is going into my Favorite's list!

I loved it well please continue.

That was marvellous. (to put it in a nutshell)

That was a very moving fic. I'm not in favor of any relationship, (well, maybe Kiyone just because that pisses everybody off) but I am in favor of a good story. I say keep up the good work, and screw all of the AHRLI's to hell! Keep it up. (Side note: Da Brits rock!)

Hi hi! Yay! An Aeka fic! Ever notice how there just don't seem to be many Aeka fics out there? N-e-way, i loved it and I hope you write more. _

not bad,not bad, needs some work,but not bad

That was a good story, even in Tenchi and Ayeka didn't end up together in the end! I enjoyed reading it! Peace

That was great! I like Ayeka and Tenchi Fics, too!

oh i luv ur fic. it was sooo good. I really hate ryoko for some reason

I loved it! Beautifully written and it was just so lovely!

AYEKA RULES! *ahem* Sorry. There should sooooo be more T/A fics! Way to go! Keep it up!

*sniffles* Oh...my...*sobs* IT'S SO SAD! *grabs Trunks* )Trunks: *sighs* Here she goes again!)Mileena: *sniffles* Hey...*clears throat* I loved it. Seriously. It's better than any of mine, that's for darn sure (note: I'M WORKING ON 'EM!) It was touching, and the song added a GREAT affect. I liked the litte notes at the bottom...yeah...and all I can say is...wow...this TOTALLY ROCKS! Talk to ya later! (ps. you know me better as lost_saiyan_soul)

Excellent.

That was really really good. I loved the whole thing! Keep it up!

This sucks. It was good but it sucks.