wow...that was...huh. i can't tell what it made me feel. it's really good! and strange! i like how bakura never talks but ryou refers to him as 'you'. it's really cool how ryou seems so detached through out the whole thing, it fits with his personality i guess. it's so good! you should write more stories!

Aw!
Ryou was a little happier than I would have thought, but I liked it none the less.
I love Mariku's person in it. Being the blonde, hyper-active spaz he truely is.

Good Job.

-Lt.

Aw! Cute! I loved it!