I have a small bit of hope you'll continue but the chances are low so continue please! anyways I'm a total Bartleby fan!

Wow. This is another one I hope you pick back up sometime soon.
I loved the chapter titles (I shot Mt Dew out of my nose when I understood the significance of Chitty Chitty Bang Bang)
And Kaede as Grandma Mazur?! and asking Sesshomaru on date to church?!? thats about as funny as it gets. Bartleby was a perfect Rex, Kagome was a perfect Stephanie, Inuyashi was a great Joe, but Koga just wasn't as smooth as Ranger (he did have a dollop of Ranger in him but you could have called him Billy and I would have known it was Koga). Otherwise you totally captured Janet Evanovich's style of writing.. plenty of humor and a good amount of sexual tension mixed with some empathy for the protagonist and a good car bombing. (I love her work if you can't tell =P). Just when I think I can't be more impressed... Well, I'm going to continue to read the rest of your work.
Thanks again and please please please keep writing (even if you don't continue with your older works) you have true talent and you are a pleasure to read.

PS Sesshomaru as a thug in leather pants with an outie?? yeesh I'm still flushed over that.

YAY! Stephanie Plum-ness! *cheers* Update this soon, kay?

(Just an interesting factoid... Did you know that jedgehogs are illegal in PA? I've been trying to get one for a while now, and I can't cuz if it gets sick, I can't take it to a vet :( Maybe Kagome has a permit? Lol) ^^

This is an awesome story! :)

hehehe...FLUFFY IS A LAP DOG!

Inu is stayin' in her crib?If I was her I would have had some not so PG13 thoughts about then!

...i'm jealous of kagome...I DON'T JUST LIKE INU CAUSE HE'S HOT!

I-I-I love him...




*whimper,whimper/cry,cry*

Kagome's bein' a pig...But I do feel sorry about her cash case...




mostley cause I'm broke too...

I laugh! + Inu's bein' a bit cooler!



i still think koga's awesome *HOT* though...

I'm startin' to like Koga more and more... ( * * )
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!O!

INUYASHA IS BEING A FUCKING DICK!


i think i like koga better now...

Inuyasha's actin' like a damn jackass!

HAHA!Kags stole his ride!

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~ p.s.HAHA!

OH COME ON!WE all luv POT!

DON'T BE MEAN TO INUYASHA! *breath,breath/pant,pant* HE IS NOT LIKE THAT!AND YES I DO KNOW YOU MENTAL PATIENT!


p.s.nice story!
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