oh i love this so much..by any chance are you going to finish it lol?

I know it's been awhile since you updated, but is there any chance you'll give us another chapter? it's a good story and I'm curious to see what leads to it

hey plz update soon i really want to know how they ended up in nick's house update soon plz

Absoutely Loved it. Can't wait for u 2 post a new chapter.

nice, keep going!

Ah, I've missed this story so much, and I'm very happy to see you bacl :D Hope things won't stay too bad for you ín real life, I know how bad it can get when thigns just take over.

Anyway, loved the new chapter. Glad to see that Nick's funny thoughts in between the storyline and their banter, then not talkin to each other, then flirting again is still the way it way before. Cause I really love that. Can't wait to read more, espcially can't wait to finally find out how they did end up where they were in chapter 1.

grissom is the master at bad timing, and so is greg lol. eek seems there is more angst up ahead, BAD! lol, i just want more of the hot stuff from chap 1 :D

Very good. Can't wait to read more.

I was so happy to see that you updated the story. I'm loving it, I can't wait to see more!

it's been a while so i'm not entirely sure if i've ever reviewed this story before and i can't be bothered to check... so if i have, i still love this story; if i haven't, i'll tell you, for the first time, how very much i love your story. i also can't remember whether i've put this on my favourite's list (it's certainly on my alert list), but rest assured that if it's not now, it will be by the next time you update.
i couldn't really remember which story this was when i got the email update, so i re-read it all. just so you know, it's just as wonderful the second-time 'round. you have a great wit and are a gifted writer. and for bonus marks, you've created a story that is realistic. anyway, i love it and am impatiently waiting for the next update.

I just wanted to say that I am really enjoying this story. The thoughts of Nick are very funny at times. Good job

Ah, poor Greg is almost always out of the loop. Update soon!

**wit.

“Nick!”
Nick looked up startled, “What?”
“Who you calling a **wit?” Warrick looked puzzled.
“I… I said that out loud?”
“No man I’ve become a mind reader.”

Sorry, haven't even got past this part yet because it made me laugh so hard I snorted ice cream out my nose!

I like how you're doing it nick's pov, we get all his doubts and insecurities, we experience his emotional rollercoaster first hand. Then of course, there are the funny parts. I will make sure I'm not eating or drinking anything else before I continue...

I hope it will stop raining in your life...it sucks when you have so many problems and feel so helpless about it.

On with the review...
Loved it? Hated it?
I surely loved it! How can anyone hate it anyway?

Please post soon!

Oh, please don't leave us hanging...please put the rest of your life on hold and sit down and finish this. :) But seriously, I'm dying for a good read and I want more of this...please. :D