 slime frog 2005-12-29 . chapter 4LOVED that one |
 Jamie Love 2005-12-29 . chapter 4 Hm...Yuri...interesting. |
 Jamie Love (too lazy) 2005-12-29 . chapter 5 OMG! So sad! Wa!
Update, its good! |
 crazy pineapple lady 2005-12-29 . chapter 5 hey- read the lot. really really good- short, quick and no flabby details. Congrats- go get published! |
 crazy pineapple lady 2005-12-29 . chapter 1 excellent- really excellent. brilliant vivid imagery in the 'only a butler'- or whatever it was called- story. thanks for that! |
 Dim Aldebaran 2005-12-26 . chapter 5Ooh, prettyful. I like the one at the end with Dom.
The conncted ones with Juliet were nice too; the changed/unchanged one seemed a touch awkward to me, but the one after ("The flying girl") is really really cool. And the one where she's wondering about poor Angeline.
Anywho, glad you updated. Great job! |
 Dim Aldebaran 2005-11-27 . chapter 3Cool. I liked the second one best. The touch with 'Andrew' was neat. The first one was a little hysterical and confuzzling, not quite sure what to advise about it, and the third was just sort-of there. They seemed well-written to me (better than anything *I* could do) but could use a bit of editing. Again, no idea what to do specifically. Just my two cents.
Keep it up! |
 Kitty Rainbow 2005-11-16 . chapter 3As I'm sure you've guessed from my gushing reviews on your journal, af100 and the like: I love your drabbles. You and they are just awesome.
Nng.
That is all.
--Kitty
PS: *HUG!* |
 Jamie Love 2005-11-12 . chapter 3Erm...okay...interesting. A bit different, but still very nice. Update soon! |
 Jamie Love 2005-11-12 . chapter 2Everyone dies! Oh well, cant say I'm surprised. A lot of your writing is dark. One of the reasons I enjoy reading it so much. Now, chapter three... |
 Jamie Love 2005-11-12 . chapter 1So sad! Very nice though. Now on to chapter two! |
 slime frog 2005-11-12 . chapter 3 ah, Blue! you're not dead! *lets of streamer in a tired fashion* sorry. I got dragged out of bed at the hideous hour of 4:30 this morning. *shudder*
anyway. gloriously wonderful, as usual. I hope life is treating you ok, as in, GIVING YOU TIME TO WRITE SUCH THINGS AS LIFE. *pauses* that was the next in your fantabulous trilogy, right? it's just been so long...
please update soon. Agent Slime is heavily sedated, but if i accidentally miss her hourly injections... |
 Robert 2005-11-12 . chapter 3 make em longer |
 LunaML 2005-11-11 . chapter 3All of them are great!
~Luna |