you like countray music so do i people in my school listen to that rap stuff. so whos your favorite countray aritst mines john michael montgomery.

ok i'm not done yet but i thought i should point out that before the part 'and for the first time in a long time she bowed her head to pry...'

it goes

'it was still getting colder when she made it to the shoulder and the car came to a stop. she cryed when she saw that baby in the back seat sleeping like a rock.'

that was stupid! I hated it!

um okay i'm also very religious i'm a apostilic if you know what that is any way i liked tat story

LEAP OF FAITH!AWESOME!

Uh... I just read this exact story like 5 minutes ago... so... In your AN you said that it is your friend's story... I'm guessing that she wrote it and both of you posted it, but I'm not really sure, so... I'm going to tell you the same thing I told the other girl... overall it was Pretty good... the characters were a little OOC though... and I didn't really like how she was going to her parent's house and then just wasn't anymore. Also, I think that it was a pretty sucky ending... but apart from that it was good... I love that song, and I liked how you had Nick being the father... for the whole story I thought it was Jimmy lol... Tell your friend she did a really nice job on it!

Great story! Except doesn't allow you to put songs in your stories.

That was a great story! I really liked it. It had a nice ending!

Aw! Nice story! I really enjoyed it! Loved the religious part...God is very capable of anything, and I have been in a situations where you just have to call upon the Lord and viola! He's saved ya! Even when you don't really deserve it...

Anyhoo, your friend did a nice job! Little rushed at the end, but still a very nice piece. ^.^

What the...? She has Nick's baby, but Jimmy finds that ok, and an ethereal presence drives a car? Wow. I believe in God as much as any of you, but God would never steer a car away from a collision. We have free will, remember? In recapitulation, your story is weird. Just plain weird.

YAY! that was pretty darn good!

I see a great writer! and it was really nice of you to post it for her.

she should keep going/you too as well nicoley.

Very good I liked it!

wow! this was good!! awesome job. I loved it! :D :D

-katie-

Sorry, I forgot a verse. Right after the first "Jesus take the wheel" verse it goes like this:

It was still getting colder
When she made it to the shoulder
And the car came to a stop
She cried when she saw the baby in the backseat
Sleeping like a rock

SORRY!

A good story i look forward to your next fanfic