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| solojones 2006-08-12 ch 1,  | abuseThis was really, really good. Seriously, one of the very best 24 fics I've read. I wish I could read more like this. You did a great job of portraying the characters and situations in a realistic and faithful manner. Keep up the writing! |
| Em-958 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseWoah! Really great story! I love it! I love Teri's charecter and Jack's charecter, and I was so sad when she died in the last ep. of season 1. They were a great match. ' This story is very wellwritten. You must have put much thought into this oneparter. :) I really like your writing style, it's right in all the ways :) You really show Teri's feelings about their marriage in a beatiful and accurate way. I just really love it. Please keep the good work up and don't stop writing! You have really great potential! I'll keep an eye on you! //Emma |
| AnnaLangdon 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseI can't think of enough positive adjectives to describe your story! Beautiful, insightful, touching, wonderful, excellent...!! I absolutely LOVED it! |
| LuKEN 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuseNice. Very well-written indeed. I have to say I'm not particularly fond of Teri but this is the best piece I've read on her POV. |
| Heather McFey 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseooh very good. You had me fooled, I thought we were talking Nina here. But I liked this alot, edgy and clever. I look forward to reading more of your stuff. |
| Aranel Abeille 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abuseGood fic! I was expecting angst about Nina (that was, I suspect, what you wanted us to think), but this was a really good study on Jack and Teri's relationship. : ) |