This was really, really good. Seriously, one of the very best 24 fics I've read. I wish I could read more like this. You did a great job of portraying the characters and situations in a realistic and faithful manner. Keep up the writing!

Woah! Really great story! I love it!

I love Teri's charecter and Jack's charecter, and I was so sad when she died in the last ep. of season 1. They were a great match. '

This story is very wellwritten. You must have put much thought into this oneparter. :) I really like your writing style, it's right in all the ways :)

You really show Teri's feelings about their marriage in a beatiful and accurate way. I just really love it.

Please keep the good work up and don't stop writing! You have really great potential!

I'll keep an eye on you!

//Emma

I can't think of enough positive adjectives to describe your story! Beautiful, insightful, touching, wonderful, excellent...!! I absolutely LOVED it!

Nice. Very well-written indeed. I have to say I'm not particularly fond of Teri but this is the best piece I've read on her POV.

ooh very good. You had me fooled, I thought we were talking Nina here. But I liked this alot, edgy and clever. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

Good fic! I was expecting angst about Nina (that was, I suspect, what you wanted us to think), but this was a really good study on Jack and Teri's relationship. : )