Well, it's taken me about three years to come back and finish the story (I've been a little busy), but what do you know, I finally finished!

This is a good, sweet story. I like how Jack and Lauren really care about each other. I was glad to read this story, and I hope you continue writing!

Jack sure seems nice. Even the actor, John Ritter, was a really nice person. May he rest in peace.

Very good. I like self-insert stories. They're always interesting. You could probably improve paragraph spacing and add more detail, though, but other than that, it's good. I'll be sure to review the next chapter(s).

-Joe

That would be so awesome to be living in "Three's Company Land." lol! Great idea!