 Sylvia12 2008-11-26 . chapter 10AH! UPDATE! This story is FANTASTIC! |
 Mary Potter77 2008-01-21 . chapter 10I love this story! Please update soon! I want to know what happens. |
 3rd clss rckstr 2007-07-15 . chapter 10I love this story!:) |
 Twiguy04 2007-07-13 . chapter 10Fantastic! |
 Issylt 2007-07-13 . chapter 10THANK GOODNESS YOU UPDATED AT LAST! I WAS BEGINNING TO THINK YOU'D FORGOTTEN ABOUT THE STORY ALTOGETHER!
Ahem, anyway, beautiful chappie, as always. Hope to see more SOON! |
 Spottedstar106 2007-07-12 . chapter 10That was great!Please update soon!
Spottedstar, leader of windclan |
 EragonPeep 2007-07-12 . chapter 10He likes her! Not Murtagh but Lanner! It is so obvious! Thankyou for mentioning me at the bottom of your story!! I love it when people mention me! Please update soon!!
EP |
 My-Lover-Gren-Gren 2007-07-12 . chapter 10I i should be able to wait ;) lol anywho um love the chapter :D can't wait for the new one... :D i know what its like with school :( but you got the chance to update YAY
BAH anywho i'm going to go now :D can't wait for next chapter (hint hint) ;) byers |
 Peribug Took 2007-07-12 . chapter 10OMFG THATS AWESOME DUDE/DUDETT (SINCE U REFUSE 2 REVEAL UR GENDER LOL)UPDATES ASAP PLEASE! IM DYING HERE! |
 alsdssg 2007-07-12 . chapter 10So, who's this Laner? Please, start updating more frequently. It'll keep people interested. |
 My-Lover-Gren-Gren 2007-07-09 . chapter 9AHH ah ah... update you must update. He should tell her bout thorn or get thorn to eat the anoying guy (who's a fop :D) anywho can't wait till the next chapter :D hint hint
BYE!
UPDATE
SOON
Please? |
 EragonPeep 2007-05-02 . chapter 9Please please please do another chapter! You haven't done one in like 5 months!!
PLEASE!!
ER |
 Fricai 2007-03-07 . chapter 9First off, excellent story. I love the idea. She is sort of becoming a Mary-Sue, though. But that doesn't really matter.
Couple of questions: Are you going to include Eragon and Arya? And do you plan on keeping Murtagh and her on Galbatorix's side?
Anyways, update ASAP! Its been forever! |
 MinaLovesMusic 2006-12-30 . chapter 9I am in LOVE with your storyline! It's all so well written... (*begins squealing about how excellent and incredibly awesome the whole story is*) ^_^ |
 De Code Master 2006-12-28 . chapter 9*Screams "MURTAGH!" like a fangirl* All I can say is that you're an amazing writer. The storyline is very well spun, and Alexander is a clearly defined character. I'm really hoping that we won't see Mendhem agaon. He annoys me. A lot. ^_^ Do update soon! PS. You sound like a girl, but I could be wrong. |