Heh wasn't super awful.

Hmm. On the one hand, this is a clever idea and well written. On the other hand, this is like writing that Akane malletted Ranma and his body splattered across the wall. Even if you haven't read enough of the manga to tell that deities are very resilient creatures, the word "goddess" should clue you in. They aren't magical girls a-la Sailor Moon or fairy god mothers. Just because they're usually nice and friendly and "normal" doesn't mean they aren't powerful and nigh-invulnerable. Their behavior (this goes for demons, too) is very carefully regulated, mainly because even with their power limiters they have the potential to do catastrophic things to the universe.

AAAAAAAAACK! (Ummm, sorry not to write something more constructive, but this is the only remark my mind can come up with regarding Belldandy being stuck through with a knife).

I guess I'm not the only one who wonders why they're that size. Personally, did anyone ever think it could be URD who shrunk them? I mean, look in the opening and in episode 2: you can clearly see she has the ability to shrink. This is how I think the goddesses got small. Don't know the foggiest as to why Keiichi didn't shrink, though...maybe he was on an errand at the time. I want to write a story where he gets small, too, because, as much as I like Gan-chan the rat, we need a better humorist around here (though Gan-chan is pretty funny). Anyone here do someone like that, or knows someone who did that, please tell me!

Good Story, just one thing, isn't Belldandy in the adventures of the Mini-Goddesses storyline? Also, You just can't kill her and end it like that! At least try to put some finality on this turn of events.