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| helaluvE 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abusewow you're right some things are best kept short and this little piece is proof of it. it was great :) |
| AmyNY 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just wow. I am literally speechless. Loved the last line. Brilliant. |
| StaleCoffee 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abuse"Jess won’t be the one to tell him that he’d read Salinger before Logan was old enough to spell it." I love that line, great story, short and simple and that is what makes it great. |
| Alliegirl 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseHey, I really like this story. While I like that Jess was cool and collected in the episode a part of me missed the smart assed comment the Jess of old would have made, so it was nice to read what he may have been thinking. And like the episode it does a nice job of showing how far Jess has come and how far Rory has fallen. |
| demersal 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseaw, this is great. |
| sanfrangiantsfan 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was super good. Even though it was a short one-shot it definately will stick with me. Fabulously written and you used Logan's lines very well throughout it. I wonder if Logan had even read anything by the authors he was spewing off to Jess. He is kinda a dumbass, slacker, rich boy. I am glad that in the episode, Logan's true colors finally showed really well. I personally think that it was so good because Daniel Palladino was the one who wrote it and even though he tends to write wackier stuff, his style was exactly what that episode needed to be perfect. Even though Jess left, it was what needed to happen for Rory to straighten out her life. If Jess had stayed, everything would not have changed the way it did in last week's episode.~Alexa |
| Justin 2005-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseo.o This one, tiny ficlet has floored me so much more than a hundred novel length fics. *loves it* |
| KrazyKarah 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. |
| Jennifer 2005-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAbsolutely gorgeous. Every word is perfection. "He thinks it’s his ears playing tricks, the slap of her shoes on the cobblestone. He’s wrong and she’s standing before him, trying to make excuses, trying to tell him she’s okay, she’s not drowning in beer and bratty boys. She won’t die of boredom or suffocate beneath her grandmother’s horrible taste in décor." That paragraph was so breathtakingly right. You captured the feeling of the confrontation perfectly, and I especially love the alliteration of "beer and bratty boys" - it has such a nice ring to it. Thank you for writing this and sharing it! |
| enigmatic darling 2005-11-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was absolutely perfect and written beautifully, Fizz. Oh, and I adored the Salinger line. Hee! :) |
| ms. polaris black 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseShort adn to the point I loved it...and yes Jess was perfect never thought I say that...Logans complete ass!! |
| crazyfanfic 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseHah! *shows Logan this fic* Take that, you blond dick! "153 pages, front to back, table of contents to about the author. A short novel. He didn’t tell her it was epic. That it was his life story. That it was hers." *loves it* I really love the way you write Jess. It's exactly how I would imagine his thoughts, but I don't have the acility to put them on paper. You're amazing. |
| Chloe 2005-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! I was confused at first and had to read it another time and then I understood! And then I liked it so I read it a few more times. lol great work! |
| Michelle 2005-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh! This ficcy was definitely worth 14 reviews overnight, missy! :) "Jess won’t be the one to tell him that he’d read Salinger before Logan was old enough to spell it." Hah! In. Your. Face. You blonde dick at Yale! :p "Some things are best kept short." *points* Like this fic! :D |
| JustPeachy123 2005-11-12 ch 1, | abuseOh...I didn't see the episode (stupid school events!) but this was perfect. Sweet, short, amazing. Perhaps it was the music I was listening to - Saint Simon, The Shins - that gave the story this accent that made it perfect. |