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Innortal
2007-09-26
ch 23,
abuseVery inventive work. Well done.
Hououza
2007-09-24
ch 23,
abuseExcellent chapter.

So, now they have an even greater foe to face, even if this one for the moment at least is a friend.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
dennisud
2007-09-24
ch 23,
abuseWell Interresting scene we have here.
You'd think having ALL three Evas in the fianl battle would turn the tide.

yet here we have a "Super" Eva just in time to slaughter the MP's while still knowing its the Judas before the end.


Neat!

dennisud

BTW will Rei end up like the one in the series?

I sure don't want that!

She above all others was the biggest victim of all in MHO!
Alucius
2007-07-12
ch 22,
abuseCool! Combat time! I can't wait to see what they do to these Evas. In the anime, Asuka got kicked because she was solo. Triple time is the name of the game :)
Hououza
2007-07-12
ch 22,
abuseExcellent chapter.

So, now the final battle is upon them the question is how exactly this is going to play out this time.

Will Shinji complete the cycle and Unit-01 ascend or will the scenario change.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
Arm-Slave
2007-07-12
ch 22,
abuseOne of the few great EVA fanfics that actually draws to a close. I've enjoyed your take on the series since chapter one, and now here's to hoping for a happy ending.
marduk-report
2007-07-12
ch 22,
abusegood chapter. hope to see more in the near future.
and i really think the image of slightly nuclear evangelions is gonna be with me to the grave...

lol
dennisud
2007-07-12
ch 22,
abuseGood to see this is still going. I'll have to reread this as its been a while and I have to get all the facts straight here.

dennisud
Kotetsu 117
2007-04-15
ch 21,
abuseThis is really good keep it up.
Lord-Potter-Gryffindor
2007-03-17
ch 21,
abuseThis story is a good story and I can not wait to read the next chapter.
Hououza
2007-02-25
ch 21,
abuseExcellent chapter.

It's hard to know what to say, so many plans working towards completion, and yet things going well for the moment it seems that a fall is only a moment away. I look forwards to seeing what these latest twists will mean for them all and how things will work out.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
bannonluke
2007-02-25
ch 21,
abuseLiked the red dwarf reference in the omake. Another very good chapter; and I look forward to seeing the final battle.
DCWestby
2007-02-24
ch 21,
abusehum, Imteresting... so touji, Hikari and Kensuke will be the bargaining chips seemingly... keep writing.
Kuzy
2007-01-26
ch 20,
abuseWell, I will say you surprised me here, by making this story even better. I havent check in about 5 months, and I came back and re-read the story, and read the latest 4 chapters I didnt read before. A+ man. Keep it up, you are almost done.
bannonluke
2006-11-27
ch 20,
abuseA very good chapter. I also enjoyed the Rei/Kensuke omake.
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