Again, great stuff sir. I don't know where you pull this inspiration from, but I'm throwing virtual dollars at you right now...fistfuls of them. You're officially going on my Favorite authors lists right now.

i“Yes, Darren, there IS a God-& payback can be a **.”

A little Ron-karma is as briliant as the Ron-shine. I think there’s a saying by Mark Twain-living well is the best revenge.

It occurs to me you wrote these pre-Season 4.

You really add some class to this mixed bag assorted outfit of fan authors. Hope your writing vocation comes off as well as our couple’s love life.

And now on to this opus of yours.

very nice

Maybe it was just the weird dynamics of my High School, but if someone woild have tried what Darren did to Ron there, I think they would have turned on him much, much faster. Then again, I went to a weird little Catholic School, so who knows how far outside the norm my HS experience fell (well, I do know, and it's a bit, but anyway...). And besides, from my limited experiance with dateing, if your girl ain't happy, neither are you. So if she needs pads, you go get 'em if you know what's good for ya...

Very nice piece.

Ron grew up a bit or more importantly acted as the friend I always considered him to be. When KP is really desperate and worried about something Ron puts aside his usual outspoken goofiness and does what he can...a true friend.

A great quality in a boyfriend.

I liked the cheerleaders responses to Mr. Hormonally Stupid's comment about his ability to get the pieces of meat dubbed girls. Dumbass syndrome strikes again. And the best thing is its real, I've personally seen people so caught up in thinking their the hottest shit on the block only to hit the brick wall called reality.

Till next time...adios.

great story, i enjoyed reading it

I started reading at the bottom of the page, so I must apologize for not reviewing anything before this, but now I'd like to say that I love them all. You have a good eye for everyday problems that can cause interesting events in the lives of world-hopping heroes and villains. And I don't recognize the song at the end, but it reminds me of "Paradise by a Dashboard Light." Would it, by any chance, also be by Meatloaf?

Sorry to keep quoting, but . . .

"But looking past those short stories . . there's something on the horizon. Someting big. And it's coming closer."

When I first started doing this last month, I gave myself a "no epics" rule. I figured "if I want to write my own 'War and Peace' (which is something of a misnomer because the book isn't THAT long. Ayn Rand's stuff is way longer. Hell, so is Stephen King's. Anyway . . .)

You're stuff's kinda given me permission to 'go big.' Just hope I can pull it off as well. You've great talent, lad (he says to a man 6 yrs. his elder). Keep it 'til the particular KPiverse you're tuned into says you're done.

Once again a good story. I'm also pleased to read that something larger in on the horizon. You are much too good a writer to limit your stories to one shots.

I cannot believe that I didn't review this when I read it a while back.

I loved this story. It was a great culmination to the 'Blood Bond' trinity. I can actually see Ron doing exactly that. It was amazingly in character.

I also have a soft spot for nice Brick. He just always seemed so nice, if a little slow, in the series.

Is this some sort of message for all us guys out there?

Anyway I like how you took this full circle. Mrs. Dr. P is right if a person is willing to do something that embrassing (trust me it is) then they care at least a little. I'm just suprised Ron never had to run out on this sort of mission before. Figure Kim would have run into this problem before and Ron is the likely canditate to make the run.

Well overall a good story and a good series. Looking forward to more non-bleeding stories (not to say the others were bad just...uncomfortable).

amazing how many decent little tales came out based on KP's Aunt Flo. good work.

I look forward to yer new stuff.

THANKS!

Interesting continuation of the series you've got going here. I'll be watching for more.

pretty good stories this trilogy

Better give proper reference for the song at the end... legality and all that, ya know? I know the song well... Although, have you listened to it completely, and know how it ends? Sorry, being a little picky... Cool fic though! Definitely unique, and thats a GOOD thing!