Very nicely written.
I like the way you switch the narration and involve all the characters.
Of course, not enough WJ for me...

Wow!This was really really good! Brilliant actually! The idea to write in present tense and give each part of the story through a different person's perspective is awesome! It really adds to the experience and the reader feels involved in the story right away. And it's wonderfully emotional as well. Spectacular job-congratulations! You should definitely continue writing and exploring your talent. By the way-I loved the end of The Basement as well-just haven't had time to review it, so I'm mentioning it here. Bravo!

im too lazy to sighn in. anyway...yay! you still write! awsome...such trauma...
keep it coming!

Author's Note:

I'm not going to add more to this now, but someday I may write a sequal since the idea is so popular. I didn't really intend on adding more at all, but you begged so nicely that I'll probably come back to it. Just don't expect anything immediately.

-black.n.blu

Hey this so cool... me likey... lol... its nice... good job.

remember me?? well...then you stumbled uon my ULTIMATE FAVORITE STORY LINE! i love when jordan gets in a car accident! its my FAVORITE!! cant be beat! PLEASE UPDATE! no one shot- make it mutlichapter even if only a couple! PLEASE DONT END IT!! PLEASE! from your undying fan- PO-LEA-SE Up-DATE! - great job by the way im lovin' it (dun dun dun dun-na, im lovin' it!) :P

i really liked this. have u considered continueing with a more in depth story of Jordan's recovery. and maybe hook her up with garret ot nigel!

Hi!

I LOVED it!

Another GREAT fanfic.

Keep up the GREAT work!

I can't wait to read more of your fanfics!

GREAT job!

Good Bye!

WOW WOW WOW Brava! A very emotional one shot story, very nicely done in the present tense, with many first person perspectives. I really love the fact that you brought Max back. I really loved the last sentence. I am looking forward to more stories from you. Keep up the great and wonderful work.

aw

The End?! It can't be the end, you so have to do other chapters about how she pulls through it, and I think everyone who reads this would also agree! Please!