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| Triptacular 2006-01-19 ch 1,  | abuseThis is wonderful! Please consider doing more -- what an inventive idea! |
| HoVis 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abuseAh... that's good. I liked the style. Very sweet... I especially liked the last six lines. HoVis |
| Quickbeam1 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseWell done! |
| RoaringMice 2005-11-15 ch 1, | abuseFabulous. How much fun was this? I was actually hesitant to read it - dialogue only - but am quite glad that I did. The format fit the story well, and I didn't end up missing the in-betweens. |
| volley 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseFantastic fic! Got me a while to get the rhythm but then I truly enjoyed it! |
| JadziaKathryn 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseHaha - Phlox being a 'Northern European' is great. The dialogue-only format really works here. I, being a history student, have one detail to correct: for the crew, the U.S. Civil War would be almost three centuries ago, not four. This doesn't actually matter too much in the story, anyway. The other thing I especially like is the last line. It's an excellent ending. |