Ooh, it's pretty. :Grins:

I like very much; it's got a good rhythm to it and flows really well. The only criticism I can make is to check your punctuation (apostrophes are fine, but I would use commas from time to time) and to make sure you don't put words in just to make it rhyme ... if you can't think of a rhyme for a word, try using a word that resembles it rather than actually rhyming with it (wow, I use the word 'rhyme' a LOT), like in William Blake's 'Tyger' poem, in which he "rhymes" the word 'eye' with 'symmetry'.

Em x

That was really sweet. I loved it. _

What can I say? Beautiful and wonderful written as always? I'm hoping for more, so please write one of those soon. Besides, thank you for your review, I hadn't awaited to receive one for the story anymore. So thank you.