Greatness! I stayed up WAY later than I should have to finish reading this ... thanks!

Loved the story! Thanks!!
~Nessa

LOVE IT ALL SO MUCH!!ASOME!!

"Warren nodded and took the money, turning to see Steve’s eyebrows raised so far they looked like they would crawl off his face at any moment. Warren didn’t blame them. He wouldn’t want to be attached to Steve Stronghold’s face, either."

ROFL!

I just discovered this story, and I'm going to finish reading it, but that line just caught me so completely off guard I almost tipped out of my chair I was laughing so hard!

God bless!
Mara-DragonMaster

What about that strange phone call Josie Stronghold got where the caller was looking for Steve. You sounded like you were building up to something there...

This is a great story, good characterisations. I really enjoyed it.

good

Great ending. I loved it.

dude even though i know dis is a bit late but dat was a tight tight ** fic! dude it was so fing good!

congrats on finishing your story. Great last chapter

...I have to read another one of your stories...That was great...I'll miss this fic!

a very good story

Nice ending ^_^...but you had me worried for a minute there. I really loved the lines, 'What is that, like a family trait' 'I wouldn’t know...Someone tossed him in jail before I got a real chance to know him.' Ah...those were awesome. Adding the story to my faves.

Excellant work. You have portrayed Warren nicely in this story. You even got him to cry without it beinng ooc. Can't wait for the last chapter.

Yay! Yay! Yay for Steve's revelation! About time, I say! I loved this chapter, especially how Warren saved Will from knocking Larson's block off... that was really creative. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep writing! And sniff.. it's the last one next time... shoot. :(