Yay update I love Juromaru he and his brother is one of my favorite underlings of Naraku. Please update I love this story. ^_^"

Well, something has to be making Juuroumaru sick. This is mostly optional; how about Kageroumaru is dead, but his body is still rotting away in Juuroumaru's stoumach?(eww...)

No, serously, they finally get the bridle off Juuroumaru, and when he is finally to get whatever it is out of his stoumach, they find Kageroumaru's body. Juuroumaru takes a while, but recovers from his sickness.

After doing so, he finds his speed, and runs from Kouga and the others, successfully getting away. He's found by humans, and is taken care of by them.

It goes on, and Kouga finds Juuroumaru again. Remember this is all optional, you can have Kouga steal Juuroumaru away, or have him choose to go back with the wolf demon. After this, he befriends Hakkaku(mohawk) and Ginta(short-hair) behind Kouga's back, and all goes on.

Just remember; Naraku could to find out about Juuroumaru sooner or later. I've got bigger ideas about that, but I want to see how you can roll out with all of this(if you want).

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That's my ideas, and take on it. Use what you want, and pick it apart, if you like. I give this all to you by choice ^_^ My only hope to see this story continue on(if you will).

Good luck!

Aw! Poor Juromaru-kun! I would like this updated so I can see if he gets any better. ^_^

Yours truly,

Rikako, the fangirl who is waiting for this suspenseful story to updated.

XXDD

Juromaru fics are few and far between so yours was an awesome find, keep up the good work.

alright you updated! writer’s block can be a major pain but looks like you pulled out with a great update yay!

Hey, I've read 'Spoils of War' it was really good. Is this gonna turn into a KougaxJuuroumaru fic? That would be interesting. A first I believe...
To-ni-kaku... Ideas? Bath time for Juuroumaru, that's gotta be fun. ^_^
Juuroumaru: ...
Specter: YOU IS SO CUTE! *glomps*
Juuroumaru: Geh. (surprised geh)
Specter: No but seriously, I can't think of anything. Your doing good on your own power so far if you ask me. Oh... I only have Sesshoumaru. You like Sesshoumaru right? *hands albino-yaoi Sesshoumaru plushie* For a speedy update, and good luck... so good luck. ^_^

You reviewed! Yay! Bonus points for your detailing abilities. Hope you get the next chapter out soon. :)

Okey dokey then. You want ideas, you got um. Check this out: Juromaru didn't listen to Naraku before and actually destroyed his demon puppet, right? Well, since his brother resided inside of his stomach for the majority of the time, wouldn't it have been possible for Kageromaru (check the spelling on this cuz I'm lost) to have manipulated Juromaru into doing whatever his brother (I'm gonna say Kageromaru was under Naraku's control the entire time even though Juromaru wasn't) told him to for a short length of time. But, let's also say that though InuYasha's attack didn't kill Juromaru, it did kill Kageromaru releasing Juromaru from the partial mind control and Naraku's grasp. Without his brother there to 'think for him' Juromaru is lost. This could be advantageous for Koga and his crew because it means Juromaru holds no alliance towards their most bitter enemy and might (with persuasion) be led to actually help to fight against Naraku and become an asset.

Okay, whatcha think? You might have already decided on this so far and I'm just stating the obvious but if not...well, yeah. Hope this helps, if not, well, I tried. :)

P.S. This story is really good so far, please don't leave it unfinished!

P.S.S. I think in the series that Koga's friends names are actually Genta with the different colored hair and Hukaku (once again, check the spelling) with the white hair.

I don't have any ideas but this story is now on my favorites list. ^_^ The Introduction to my story is up.

hmm, this is kinda interesting. I'm afraid I don't have any suggestions for what should happen next or anything like that... but you seem to be doing pretty well as is so far. so just write what the characters tell you to and give us another good chapter. thats all I can suggest I'm afraid.

woot! an update! I really liked how you described everything in such detail, it was really easy to picture everything that was going on. Ideas? Umm i dunno, Kagome showing up would probably make things interesting, not along with Inu and everyone else, like she got seperated or something i dunno lol :-p feel free to ignore the dumb idea :D

hm, pretty good so far :)
um, ideas? another deamon show's up to kill Kouga and his team and Juromaru provides a vital distraction which helps Kouga confusing him even more?
lol, i'm probably not of any help :-p ignore me and simply continue if you can ^_^

o_o I've always wanted a Kouga and Juuroumaru fic. And this is quite good for the first chapter. Spelling, grammar, yup and your keeping Kouga and the others in character.

Unfortunately, I have no ideas to offer you. I can only say, I really do hope to see more. I've just, always wanted to see these two interact ^__^ Many blessings...