 jdjk2003960@comcast.net 2009-11-08 . chapter 15 good story so far, when is the next chapter? |
 DCWestby 2009-08-06 . chapter 14I await the next chapter of this great story.. As I finally have the LU series, I understand far more now about the Lost ship then when I first read this... Oddly enough, your story is the best of the LU stories out there, even tho its not in the LU section. |
 Tovath 2008-06-26 . chapter 15It would be nice if you were to contiue this story it is quite good. |
 Michael DiRosario 2008-01-16 . chapter 15 I have not seen or read all of the story lines that you have interwoven for this fic, but inall I very much enjoyed it. Not being a story writer in any sense of the word I cannot offer any advice for how to improve the story except that there were some grammatical and/or spelling errors. Even with that, the story was well enough that all errors were minor in comparison. In addition I would like to add that your "rant" was almost enjoyable as the story in general. If people took the time to read the story more than writing critisisms than all would be better. Like you said, if they have a problem with the way you are writing they should either move on to another story or at least give it as a polite suggestion. All of that being said I am very much looking forward to the next chapter and seeing what is going to happen next. |
 James Rennfield 2007-09-12 . chapter 15*whines* It's been over a year, *sniffle*
Great story and can't wait for the rest. So many good ones I've read have gone unfinished and would definitely be a shame to let this one die. As far as any CC goes, just check your spelling and grammer carefuly. |
 Asgeras 2007-07-21 . chapter 15Well, I certainly hope your looking to continue this story. It definitely has its perks. ^^
Can't say I really like the crossover with SG-1. I've just never been a fan of the series. Then again, that's probably because I've never wanted to waste money on cable...
Thanks for what you've written so far. To give you an indication of how much I want to see more of this story, I completed this story and will probably even read more of your other fics before I read the last Harry Potter book. :P |
 Sdarian 2007-03-31 . chapter 15Good job on this story. I was kinda suprised that you gave the psi sword to Urnaus instead of Ranma. I know that Ranma already has the staff that he got, but considering that the sword takes psi/ki to power it, he would have been the best choice for it. But still, good job on this. I'm kinda hoping that since the swordbreaker is likely to come into major battle again when they go after Kasumi, Canal might find a way to let the Senshi, or at least Saturn, channel their/her power through some sort of modified weapon system, kinda like what they did on the shuttle.
Keep up the good work, and I hope to see more chapters soon. |
 Blackdex 2007-02-07 . chapter 15I like it, its creative, fairly original (as far as Ranma-SM can be anyway), and is very well thought out. This piece is right at the deadline at which I consider a fic abandoned. I hope that I am misinterpreting this, but I am not going to bet on it. You could do a little better describing technology, but I understand that it’s hard for some people, I myself find the technologies and dialogs ridiculously simple, but have great trouble doing action, romance or comedy scenes (Drama and Suspense I can do just fine). Well, Ciao |
 corsair338 2006-12-19 . chapter 15I really enjoyed reading this story. I wasnt expecting the stargate crossover but i like it. I hope you dont completely abandon this story :) |
 borg rabbit 2006-10-05 . chapter 15I hope the muse blesses you with inspiration for another chapter. If it would help PM me with an idea for a fanart illustration and I'll make one up.
wes |
 Baran3 2006-09-19 . chapter 1wow
nabiki and ami?
crossover with lost universe?
very good
although i think the adjonstion of stargate a little too much
wonder if kasumi will finish queen of the galaxy
keep writing |
 GeorgeTobor 2006-08-25 . chapter 15Why you disabled anonymous reviews is strange. I admit to sometime saying what I would like to see writen. The little I have writen I wrote for my own enjoyment and any reviews are extra. I like your rant because it lets me know that much more about you and what you like to write. Piers Anthony, an author of light fantasy, the Xanth series, used to include about 5 to 10 pages of rant or just comments about what he was writing or how his life was going, in a section he called Authors' Notes, at the end of his books. I like your story and it is different enough that I can only guess where you may be going. Please write more, thanks. |
 DCWestby 2006-08-01 . chapter 15Ya know, in my opinion, it is always better to talk first and shoot later... It would be nice if you could give some background onb the invaders, so readers know why the policies they have. After all, it appears to be highly similar to the would be heros at least to the reader..
Keep writing. |
 JohnnyG 2006-05-18 . chapter 15Very nice. Keep up the great work.
Best,
~JohnnyG |
 hmr 2006-05-17 . chapter 15AWESOME CHAPTER! MORE! I CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW FUTURE CHAPTERS TURN OUT! KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON! |